Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

Great 1-6-1 poem for the prompt. It clearly has 2 rhyming words as per the rules and the syllable count is perfect. Good luck:)

Teresa

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016

This is from the picture challenging group, hope you enjoy.

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

These tiny poems are a challenge, and you even added rhyme. I used to play tennis when I was young, and you really captured the game. Best wishes in the contest- Joan

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good second part of the week.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written 1-6-1 poem. A good serve in a tennis match can mean the difference between a bad loss or a very good win.

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great second part of the week

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Tennis is truly a sport's racquet. A very abused little ball is knocked all over the court without getting a fair trial. This is very well written. Good luck in your contest.

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great second part of the week

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Well done Ine, I rather like this entry in this 1/6/1, poetry contest, it's hard to win these contesttoo few words, this is original and good, so you've got as much a chance as any, dear Ine. Well done. Good luck, Blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great second part of the week

reply by royowen on 03-Aug-2016

You too Ine

Comment from davisr (Rhonda)

Excellent

You serve us up a brilliant poem with this one!
Okay, had to....
I know how hard it is to convey information in a short poem--I've done it twice, and only twice.
Good for you for making such a brilliant one.
Good luck in the contest,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great second part of the week

reply by davisr (Rhonda) on 03-Aug-2016

Thanks, you too!

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a very good entry in the be a good sport contest. I wish you the best of luck. May your day and the rest of the week find you blessed. Patricia

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great second part of the week

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 1-6-1, Serve, takes us to the crucial moment in many tennis matches. The initial serve, in many cases is do devastating that the opponent loses confidence right away. Nice poem.

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great second part of the week

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

very nice, good job on the prompt using a 1.6.1 nice play on the tennis, good luck on this, nice job, have a wonderful day.

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great second part of the week

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

I really like this piece. It is very simple yet fits the requirements perfectly. I do mean perfectly. I hope this one does well.

G

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great second part of the week