Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Oh no! The frustration of those words percolating, but not congealing. Good image to accompany your 5-7-5 and the frustration is evident in your piece. Marilyn

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2016

hehehe I know right! thanks for reading!

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 5-7-5 about writers block, Words Fail Me, seems to portray this as a wound that we wish to bleed but wants to seal up and survive. We have to rip that scab off, I guess, and keep it oozing ideas.

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2016

WOW Bill! You need to put that to a 5-7-5!!! hehe nice! thanks for reading always appreciate your thoughts.. :-)))

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-I think the image reflects writer's block well.
-Format is good.
-I like the connection between 'steeped' and 'percolating.'
-These wonderful words are there,
but you just can't find them.
-Good last line.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2016

yes!!! omgoodness thank you for the catch!!! I'm a goof!!!!

reply by Pam (respa) on 30-Jul-2016

No, you're not a goof--it happens! I hope you like it well enough, as you can always find something similar. I revised the review to reflect the change.

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

A wordsmith is greatly dependent on the glossary stored within. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very god read.

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2016

Thank you so much!!! had fun with this one! :-))