Comment from VictoriaJoyce

Excellent

I commend you for seeing God's hands at work while doing dirty dishes. Enjoyed reading this. Lets the reader gather their own interpretation to some degree. Loved the photo.

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016

Thank you so much for your wonderful review. Gretchen

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

We often need to find enjoyment anywhere we can find it. I think that's one of the reason I continue to teach first graders; I can act like a child and nobody cares. LOL I enjoyed reading your poem. It was fun to read.

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016

My kids laugh at me because I act like a kid and hate being around a bunch of boring adults. Thank you so much for your kind review. Gretchen

Comment from Fridayauthor

Excellent

This is an interesting setting for a poem but it goes to show, beauty can be found anywhere. Nicely worded in such a way that the scene is easy to visualize.

Nice posting.

Thank you.

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016

Thank you for your wonderful review. Gretchen

Comment from royowen

Excellent

A nice lovely meander through the wonders and colours of a simple thing like a bubble, I think when one's eyes are alert for a glimpse of God, and the beauty of belief is God is kind to us. Beautifully written Gretchen, smooth free verse, well done, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016

Thank you, Roy. I appreciate your feedback. Gretchen

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Inspiration for writing poetry can strike us in some of the oddest and most likeliest of times, wouldn't you agree, Gretchen?
I would go as far as to wager a guess and say this one one of those times for you.
Nice...
~Dean

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 Comment Written 30-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016

It does, indeed. Thank you so much for your great review. Gretchen

reply by Dean Kuch on 03-Aug-2016

Sure thing, Gretchen, you're welcome.
~Dean

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written poem, inspiration can even be found in washing the dirty dishes. Lol. Very imaginative thinking and amazing thoughts.

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 Comment Written 30-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016

Thank you so much for your wonderful review. Gretchen