Tiny Visions
Imagining a different world16 total reviews
Comment from Spiritual Echo
Sure, bubbles in the sink--why not rainbows? At least you listen to the voice that tells you to write down the thought. Stain glass sounds funny. Would changing it to stained glass upset the meter?
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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Sure, bubbles in the sink--why not rainbows? At least you listen to the voice that tells you to write down the thought. Stain glass sounds funny. Would changing it to stained glass upset the meter?
Comment Written 01-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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I have a very vivid imagination. Lol. Thank you for the great review. Gretchen
Comment from Cynthia1
It is fascinating how the poet can find such beauty in such a tiny thing! I loved this little poem with its wonderful imagery and message of promise. The movement in the poem is wonderful.. especially the line "A little puff of breath it lifted..sFoated away.... Lovely.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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It is fascinating how the poet can find such beauty in such a tiny thing! I loved this little poem with its wonderful imagery and message of promise. The movement in the poem is wonderful.. especially the line "A little puff of breath it lifted..sFoated away.... Lovely.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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Thank you so much for your splendid review. Gretchen
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You are so welcome
Comment from Jay Squires
Not just a little musing, Gretchen. You wrote a deep poem about a simple object. Those are the best kind, as far as I'm concerned. Good job!
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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Not just a little musing, Gretchen. You wrote a deep poem about a simple object. Those are the best kind, as far as I'm concerned. Good job!
Comment Written 30-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review. Gretchen
Comment from Joy Graham
I like the theme of this poem :) It reminds me of the days before I had a dishwasher lol! I always hated washing dishes by hand. You have me thinking back to those days and I can even smell the soap. I like the image of catching a soap bubble and looking into it like a crystal ball. This is a fun poem that provokes thoughts. Well done!
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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I like the theme of this poem :) It reminds me of the days before I had a dishwasher lol! I always hated washing dishes by hand. You have me thinking back to those days and I can even smell the soap. I like the image of catching a soap bubble and looking into it like a crystal ball. This is a fun poem that provokes thoughts. Well done!
Comment Written 30-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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Thank you so much for your excellent review. Gretchen
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Gretchen
= Oh, wouldn't it be wonderful to pop the bubble in this world that's so chaotic, and rearrange ... mold to begin anew?
= YES, I vote for that. I enjoyed our musings. Nicely sorted.
(*>*) A Smile Is A Frown Turned Upside-down (*>*)
Cheers & Blessings ~ Jacqueline ~ Jackie ~ Jax
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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Hi, Gretchen
= Oh, wouldn't it be wonderful to pop the bubble in this world that's so chaotic, and rearrange ... mold to begin anew?
= YES, I vote for that. I enjoyed our musings. Nicely sorted.
(*>*) A Smile Is A Frown Turned Upside-down (*>*)
Cheers & Blessings ~ Jacqueline ~ Jackie ~ Jax
Comment Written 30-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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That would be interesying, but would we really go through with it. Great review. Gretchen
Comment from Sankey
haha good muse. A bit of extra detergent left making the raind=bow for ya. Loved the picture. Some good thoughts through here. Needing to get back to writing. Hope I get as much support from the reviewers as I have given to their works hehe.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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haha good muse. A bit of extra detergent left making the raind=bow for ya. Loved the picture. Some good thoughts through here. Needing to get back to writing. Hope I get as much support from the reviewers as I have given to their works hehe.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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Good luck with your writing. Everyone needs to take a break now and again. Great review. Gretchen
Comment from BeasPeas
I love musings like this. It takes keen observation to appreciate these moments, these little gems that bring us to a new level of perception. Nicely done. Marilyn
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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I love musings like this. It takes keen observation to appreciate these moments, these little gems that bring us to a new level of perception. Nicely done. Marilyn
Comment Written 30-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review. Gretchen
Comment from nancy_e_davis
LOL That's wonderful Gretchen. You see God's promise in a bubble while doing your dishes. His promise can also disappear like bursting a bubble if we don't change out ways. Well done my friend. xx Nancy
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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LOL That's wonderful Gretchen. You see God's promise in a bubble while doing your dishes. His promise can also disappear like bursting a bubble if we don't change out ways. Well done my friend. xx Nancy
Comment Written 30-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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Thank you for your kind review and the fun delivery of ot. Gretchen
Comment from Ric Myworld
I guess we have all noticed the colorful designs in soap bubbles while doing dishes. Of course, don't ever tell anyone that I have ever washed dishes, it might be bad for the image. Thanks for another fine read. :-)
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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I guess we have all noticed the colorful designs in soap bubbles while doing dishes. Of course, don't ever tell anyone that I have ever washed dishes, it might be bad for the image. Thanks for another fine read. :-)
Comment Written 30-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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Your secret is safe with me. Lol. Thank you for your wonderful review. Gretchen
Comment from c_lucas
A few years ago, we were showing my namesake, a retired magazine photographer from Virginia, Arizona's sites. We were driving slowly and turned a mountainous bend only to be block by the end of a rainbow. The end straddled the narrow road, but alas, no pot of gold. My uncle had up park in the middle of the road while he took several images. It was the highlight of his trip.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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A few years ago, we were showing my namesake, a retired magazine photographer from Virginia, Arizona's sites. We were driving slowly and turned a mountainous bend only to be block by the end of a rainbow. The end straddled the narrow road, but alas, no pot of gold. My uncle had up park in the middle of the road while he took several images. It was the highlight of his trip.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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Cool. I love to see rainbows. Only seen one double rainbow. Now that's a sight to behold. Thanks so much for the wonderful review. Gretchen
