Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

This is very well done in your own special style. You convey the pain slowly being washed away by a measure of trust and hope beautifully. Nicely done and I thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2016

Thanks,
Depression is the number one mental illness.
It comes in many forms...
From mild to sever to... Depression with psychotic
Syndrome.Psyso Effective to severe psysofrenia.

Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

First, three small corrections -
1) "allright" would be two words; if you want it to be one, it's "alright"
2) "Unforgiving" - no "e"
3) daughters' - you say doors - plural, and in the next line you say "their", so the apostrophe goes outside the word
Ricky, this is really quite wonderful - your use of the repeat lines, "And I am walking...One step at a time..." is such an apt description of depression, and the only way we can handle it! Well done.

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2016

Aww...
Thanks Dawn

Comment from tbacha58

Exceptional

I am still waking to a reason to live?"
"I Lost it * All...
"And, had so much to give...
"But, a Fate can be Unforegiving...
"This world is only for...
"The Living...

Oh Rickey I have been away for nearly a year, and this poem cuts my heart when i read it, of course, you cannot be happy without your beloved son and wife. Life is sickening, it is so hard living alone, I am so so sorry fo your misery and so sorry you have no friends here on fan. Go step by step as you said, but try not
to use bad language, maybe that is why they do not review your poems or your writings. Please take care. Bless u Terry xoxo

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2016

Thanks Thersa, I,will correct it, later
And where have you been?
RICKY1024