Dream Escapes
Where we go in worlds we create all on our own25 total reviews
Comment from DianeK
You are very lucky to remember your dreams. I wish I could. Is this poem a dream? It does depict what I feel like when I climb into my bed at night right before I drift off to sleep.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2016
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You are very lucky to remember your dreams. I wish I could. Is this poem a dream? It does depict what I feel like when I climb into my bed at night right before I drift off to sleep.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2016
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Thank you for the review, some of the examples are from dreams I've had!
Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
Very good job on this entry into the Free-verse contest! Thoroughly enjoyed it in its entirety. One small error: My world contain colors not seen (Should be "contains" not "contain"). Other than that, I see nothing that needs correcting to make this read any better or smoother. Enjoyed reading this very much. Good luck in the contest. God bless and hugs, Susanne
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2016
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Very good job on this entry into the Free-verse contest! Thoroughly enjoyed it in its entirety. One small error: My world contain colors not seen (Should be "contains" not "contain"). Other than that, I see nothing that needs correcting to make this read any better or smoother. Enjoyed reading this very much. Good luck in the contest. God bless and hugs, Susanne
Comment Written 28-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2016
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Thank you for the review and the suggestion!
Comment from jusylee72
this is very good and true . *I do have one change.
You have the poem centered. I think it would look better just regular. The centering confused my eye. Look at it once, see which way you like it best
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2016
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this is very good and true . *I do have one change.
You have the poem centered. I think it would look better just regular. The centering confused my eye. Look at it once, see which way you like it best
Comment Written 28-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2016
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Thank you for the review and the suggestion, I'll have to take a look!
Comment from Heather Knight
This is a good explanation of what dreams feel like. Of all the things that are possible when we are asleep. My only criticism is that the imagery is perhaps not fantastic enough, that it is too close to reality.
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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2016
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This is a good explanation of what dreams feel like. Of all the things that are possible when we are asleep. My only criticism is that the imagery is perhaps not fantastic enough, that it is too close to reality.
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Comment Written 28-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2016
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hmmm, I'll have to think on that. Thank you for the review!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello,
I have crazy dreams too. I used to keep a dream journal by my bed to write dream poetry.
Great job! It's a beautiful poem.
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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2016
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Hello,
I have crazy dreams too. I used to keep a dream journal by my bed to write dream poetry.
Great job! It's a beautiful poem.
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Comment Written 28-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2016
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I used to too, I wish I had kept up with it. Thank you for the review!
