Comment from William Ross

Excellent

very nice on this, memories are worth more than all the gold, good rhyming on this as well as great story told. have a wonderful day

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016

Hi William. Once again thank you for your great support and comments for my poem and also wish you a lovely day. ( I hope it is warm where you are I am cold and wet with Winter upon us ) Cheers Christine

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Memories of yesterday will help us through tomorrows. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is good imagery.

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016

Hi c lucas. I thank you for stopping by for a read and I am pleased you thought this a smooth flow and interesting. I enjoy the challenge of new styles and appreciate you review for feedback Many Cheers Christine

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

Lovely poem. How true... memories are free, special treasures that no one can take from us, ours to keep and enjoy for a lifetime. I value them more as I grow old. :)

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016

Hi Phyllis. Thank your for reading and reviewing my poem I am glad you liked it and yes our memories are ours and I have many happy ones. Cheers to you Christine

Comment from thonnigford09

Exceptional

This was an amazing poem. I didn't even attempt this type of poetry. , I love to write poetry, but have trouble with meter. I will attempt a more difficult form in the future, but I tried a sonnet and it didn't go well. Iambic pentameter!! Ugh. Anyway, I liked the memory message, but try to keep my good memories solidly to myself. Someday to be shared. Anyway, thanks and I could find no error and would recommend this!!!! thonnigford09.

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016

Hi thonnigford09 . Oh my I am so pleased you thought is so highly and Thank You for your rating of six stars. I thought I would have a go at this style and so pleased you found it with no error. This has made it worth the while to try this style and I am honoured with your praise. Why not have a go just follow the prompts and see what you can come up with. Many Thanks again Cheers for a lovely day Christine

reply by thonnigford09 on 26-Jul-2016

Thanks:)

reply by Anonymous Member on 30-Jul-2016

Thanks:)

Comment from fionageorge

Excellent

Congratulations and well done on this difficult looking format. I took one look at the instructions, and thought, 'forget it'!. But you have managed a true love poem within the confines of this structure, and you have made it look easy. I'll bet it wasn't... Good luck in the contest and warmest regards, Marijke :o)

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016

Hi Marijke, Many thanks for your congratulations for my poem for this contest with your talent you could write one. It was a challenge but I am pleased with my responses and It makes it worthwhile when people like my work Many Cheers to you Christine

Comment from Allison78

Excellent

This is such a lovely moving poem! The older I get the more I realize how precious our memories are especially after I've lost people close to me. This is beautifully written and very sweet. You did a great job with this!

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 Comment Written 26-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016

Hi Allison78 I thank you for reading and reviewing my poem for this contest and for your encouraging words I am glad I had a go at this style. So many Cheers for your time

Comment from Liberty Justice

Excellent

NICE! "He brightens up my day" happy expression how someone makes Writer field. Poem inspirational and happy. Is true testimonial to someone loved. liberty justice

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 Comment Written 26-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016

Hi Liberty Justice. Thanks so much for your review and lovely comments. I wasn't sure if this was on the mark but I am glad you thought it inspirational And he does Cheers

reply by Liberty Justice on 26-Jul-2016

correction:feel