Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Jesse,
I enjoyed your poem. It has great flow & rhyme. Your message is awesome & clearly expressed. You are right in that helping others help oneself, too.

The artwork is awesome.

Good job & thanks for sharing an uplifting poem. Jan

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2016

Thanks for your enthusiastic review. I am glad you enjoyed reading it, and I appreciate the kind comments. I am amazed at the artwork, myself. It feels good to write an uplifting poem and have it received so well. Thanks for the boost in confidence.

Peace, Jesse

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

A beautiful poem, Jesse with the wild lavender on the forest floor adding to the tranquility.

Your metre is terrific as are your word choices, making this an uplifting poem with positive commentary.

Great job.

Gloria

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2016

Thank you for your positive review. I appreciate you complimenting my metre and word choices. That means a lot to me. I am glad you like the picture I chose with the wild lavender. I like to post uplifting poems when I am in that place, which I am now. Thanks for the boost in confidence.
Peace, Jesse

Comment from TPAC

Excellent

True from the heart conveyances, thought-provoking views the writer shares with reader. I found delightful in expression captivating times.

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2016

Thank you for your marvelous review. I love the way you put things out there. I appreciate the compliments and am glad you enjoyed reading it.

Peace, Jesse

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

This is a very positive piece of poetry. It speaks to the gift of giving freely to others and the rewards of doing that provides for a person's soul and sense of well-being. Great work.

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 Comment Written 22-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2016

Thank you for your profound comments. I love your 'take' on my poem. Thanks for the boost in confidence. Thanks for the wonderful review.

Peace, Jesse

Comment from Bobbi22

Excellent

It is so true that you gain more than you give when helping others. Living life as your poem describes should lead to a place of tranquility. Very well written.

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 Comment Written 22-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2016

Thanks for the positive review. Tranquility is my goal, and personal growth is my passion. I appreciate your comments and compliment. Thanks for the boost.

Peace, Jesse