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Some Words Are Hard To Say

Some important words that are hard to say

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Comment from Evan Baughfman
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I very much agree with what you're saying here! People do not apologize or show their gratitude often enough.

I have two small children (ages 5 and 4) and I've been trying to work on getting them to say "I'm sorry" and "Thank you" with more sincerity.

Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2019

Comment from kahpot
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Wonderful, some words are hard to say and especially at the time when they need to be said, we must learn to accept that we are going to make some mistakes and this carries the acceptance to say so, an excellent read, very well written****kahpot

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2019

Comment from nomi338
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The very secret to salvation is the ability to say and mean it when we say it, I am sorry for my imperfections. Even though I did not cause the sin I was born with and into, I recognize that have the capacity to try to avoid making it worse. The fact that I often fail to do the right thing does not and should not prevent me from saying I am sorry for my failure.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2019

Comment from ElPoetry001
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Common sense [and the custom of the Japanese l]reminds us to never let another person "loose face." We in Western culture often offend people when we tell it like it is. Your message should be taught to young people and adults.
To say "I'm sorry may not bring you glory, but it will gain you respect.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2019

Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
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We all need a reminder that even though the words might be hard to say they are worth being said. I struggle with the I love you's. It's so hard for me to say it but I definitely need to work on it.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2019

Comment from dragonpoet
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This poem uses easy rhymes and flowing meter to remind us that we need to by more loving and forginving than we show. We need to verbalize our feelings to let them be known even if our actions clearly show them.
Keep writing
Joan

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2019

Comment from sunnilicious
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That was a beautiful poem. Words are more difficult than actions, but once the message is communicated clearly, it'll be okay. Well, thought out. Clearly written. Wonderful wisdom. Nice storytelling. Great work :)

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2019

Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
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The word of God declares that because of sin abounding, the love of many will wax cold. It also says that if we don't forgive that our father in heaven won't forgive us. I love the many strong messages you've conveyed in this well written and thought provoking work. Well done and Bless you!

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2019

Comment from Brenda Elizabeth Rose
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Beautifully done poem. I like the rhyme and rhythm it worked well with this piece. You are right it's hard to say "I am sorry". But this is something most of us have felt at some point in our life's. Well done. Thank you for sharing this lovely piece with us. Blessings. ~Brenda

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2019

Comment from the13thpoet
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Hello and a wonderful Wednesday to you Jaybird1. As always I enjoyed this like I have all your other works, but I think this one is the best. The words are so so very true! Thank you for sharing your words of wisdom.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2019