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Those Pesky Zombies

They are ruining the neighborhood!

8 total reviews 
Comment from Bill Schott
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This 5-7-5, Those Next Door Zombies, seems to catch a fellow on the verge of making a citizens arrest. His neighbors have probably only added to the problem. Nice poem.

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2016

Comment from Ginger Banks
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This is going to be a hard choice, this is way funny too. The picture you paint with the poetry goes extremely well with the picture of the Zombie. A really humorous view of zombies.

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2016

Comment from VaV-VOOM
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Oh hey, I think this one, so far this one is my favorite. So I pick you. Winner! Great job and with a great picture that just sealed the deal for me anyway. Write On! VaV-VOM!

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2016

Comment from BeasPeas
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Ha! Be grateful for your neighbors and that the zombies aren't eating you. Good entry into the 5-7-5. Humorous with the perfect image to accompany it. Marilyn

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2016

Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
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Very funny entry into the Zombie 5-7-5 contest. Great artwork to accompany an excellent work. Enjoyed very much. Wish you luck in the contest. God bless and hugs, Susanne

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2016

Comment from PoemsOfDD
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Don, nothing worse than noisey eaters, I'm dead serious! Don't zombies know any table manners?
A short little piece from you that reminds me not to move to your neighbourhood. :-) ~DD

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2016


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2016
    No, it's not the Zombies making the noise, DD. It's all that screaming. If you don't mind that, you can get a good deal here. There's always a house or two for sale.
Comment from lancellot
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A very funny little 5-7-5 poem. Your syllable count was spot on and the tiny picture adds to the presentation. Perhaps the zombies are the neighbors.

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2016

Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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This is a funny poem. In three lines you had me laughing. The idea of someone complaining about their neighbors being eaten as if the neighbor kids through a ball in the backyard was very funny. Great job.

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2016