Comment from royowen

Excellent

A nice entry in this sacred song contest, the gratititude that's expressed by the writer, is smoothly scribed, humbly declared and s all good gifts come from God, this is umiak let well written and rhymed in aabb rhyme, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2016

Thank you Roy! hugs, Teri

reply by royowen on 21-Jul-2016

Most welcome Teri

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written spiritual and sacred song. We often doubt the power of the Lord. One day we realize without Him we won't be able to do anything worthwhile.

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2016

Thank you my friend. So very true! hugs, Teri

Comment from RoostyNester

Excellent

A very nice sacred poem! And so very true. He is always there for us. No matter the problem, he understands. Teaches us patience, and is always patient with us! Well written with word and rhyme! Yes! All we are, he gave to us! He just expects us to use the gifts he blesses us with! If not, he will take them away and give to another.

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2016

Thank you so much for the great review. hugs, Teri

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

A lovely sacred song. Excellent title. I enjoyed the song from the first line. Nice rhyming couplets. Very well done and good luck in the contest.

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2016

Thank you so much Janet! hugs, Teri

Comment from Poetic Friend

Excellent

This poem could easily be a hymn song in churches nationwide. I would love to hear it with music.

Your last line is endearing, but oh, so true. God bestows our creativity.

Good luck in the contest

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 Comment Written 20-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2016

Thank you my friend. hugs, Teri

Comment from writeapoem

Excellent

This an excellant submit. It speaks well of that still small voice that speaks to us. If the ears of our soul are ready to listen. I appreciate your sharing how caring Jesus is. All the best

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 Comment Written 20-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2016

Thank you my friend. hugs, Teri