Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

If more peope would stay mellow there would be less thing to rage about.

Hope you do well in the contest.

Keep writing

dragonpoet

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2016

Thanks so much for the insightful thoughts as well as the encouragement:)

reply by dragonpoet on 19-Jul-2016

You are so very welcome.

dp

Comment from evesayshi

Excellent

What a lovely work of artistic expression - it complies completely with the prompt and is succinctly and engagingly philosophical - gentle in expression, but oh so positive in observation...

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2016

Did I do all that? THANKS so much for a very detailed and encouraging review:)

reply by evesayshi on 19-Jul-2016

I thought so, but then, I read it objectively. We are usually overly critical of our own work, or, as in my case, unsure of worthiness - you are very welcome - my pleasure...

reply by the author on 19-Jul-2016

I really thank you:)

reply by evesayshi on 20-Jul-2016

You are sincerely welcome...

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

The ability to hold one's own course with equinamity is a great attribute to have when surrounded by turmoil. I am reminded somewhat of Kipling's famous poem, "If".

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2016

I love this review, and to be reminded of Kipling's "If". Thanks for this insightful review:)