Comment from johnwilson

Average

Bravo! This is extremely well done! It hits hard upon the truth and never fails to come up with another great line. I loved the capitalization, language, type of poetic structure...I think you meant over a "loved" ones death?

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2016

Thanks for the kind thoughts on the three boys who died.
RICKY1024

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

It is horrible when children are missing. Your words reflect your thoughts and feelings at the time of this incident. Many can relate to your words and the feelings you express.

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2016

Thanks Mermaids much appreciated.
RICKY1024