Astatula (Final Edition)
Viewing comments for Chapter 55 "Break-In"A young boy tries to turn his life around.Can he?
11 total reviews
Comment from Walu Feral
G'day Brett. Well done again mate. He sure is a sick and twisted sort of dude. Thankfully he left the guns alone and prefers blades, but that is no consolation to his victims.
Great story and I'll look forward to reading on.
Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2016
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G'day Brett. Well done again mate. He sure is a sick and twisted sort of dude. Thankfully he left the guns alone and prefers blades, but that is no consolation to his victims.
Great story and I'll look forward to reading on.
Cheers Fez
Comment Written 16-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2016
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Glad you enjoyed this part of the story,.
Much more to come so stay tuned.
Your comments and suggestions appreciated.
Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
I am not sure how to address you my friend. I really like this chapter. This Bee-Bo is very insane, but knows what he is doing. I cannot believe he broke into Brock's home! I truly hope this could be his end, permanently. You are doing a very good job in creating this great storyline, with thought of all characters, the dialogue and the drama.
Very well written my friend,,,,,,,,Jim
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2016
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I am not sure how to address you my friend. I really like this chapter. This Bee-Bo is very insane, but knows what he is doing. I cannot believe he broke into Brock's home! I truly hope this could be his end, permanently. You are doing a very good job in creating this great storyline, with thought of all characters, the dialogue and the drama.
Very well written my friend,,,,,,,,Jim
Comment Written 15-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2016
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of the story.
Bee-Bo is indeed something else!
Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from create4christ
Another start to a great storyline. Again, you held my attention from the beginning until the end. I also didn't find grammar and spelling errors, which take away from the joy of reading for me. Well done, my Friend.
Thank you for sharing...Penny
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2016
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Another start to a great storyline. Again, you held my attention from the beginning until the end. I also didn't find grammar and spelling errors, which take away from the joy of reading for me. Well done, my Friend.
Thank you for sharing...Penny
Comment Written 15-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2016
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of the story. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from misscookie
Thank you very much for another interesting read.
As always you had me on the end of my chair. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Have blessed week end.
Cookie
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2016
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Thank you very much for another interesting read.
As always you had me on the end of my chair. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Have blessed week end.
Cookie
Comment Written 15-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2016
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Glad you enjoyed this misscookie!
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Yes you got me hooked! LOL
Cookie
Comment from MTF1955
I use to live on Maid marion also. Just a great chapter. That clown gives me the creeps and I hope the sheriff has something really special for him in the end. Look forward to another chapter. Soon please. Mary
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2016
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I use to live on Maid marion also. Just a great chapter. That clown gives me the creeps and I hope the sheriff has something really special for him in the end. Look forward to another chapter. Soon please. Mary
Comment Written 14-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2016
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I used that address because as a young boy I lived at 1313 Maid Marion Lane. Glad you enjoyed this portion of the story. Stay tuned. Much more to come. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from Sankey
OOOO Yuck! Definitely a Paedophile this nut. Gettig high on Cody's Fruit of the Looms oh me. Thanks for the explanation mid-chapter. I was a bit lost but then I realized he was at the Sherrif's house while Brock was rescuing Codey, right?
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2016
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OOOO Yuck! Definitely a Paedophile this nut. Gettig high on Cody's Fruit of the Looms oh me. Thanks for the explanation mid-chapter. I was a bit lost but then I realized he was at the Sherrif's house while Brock was rescuing Codey, right?
Comment Written 14-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2016
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of the story about our sick clown friend.
Comment from MizKat
Hi Brett,
Again you have written another wonderful and interesting chapter. You can surely keep a person reading and wanting to read more even more. Bravo,
great writer.
Kat
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2016
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Hi Brett,
Again you have written another wonderful and interesting chapter. You can surely keep a person reading and wanting to read more even more. Bravo,
great writer.
Kat
Comment Written 14-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2016
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of the story. Your comments and support appreciated.
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I happy that you appreciate what I have to say about your story. Kat
Comment from prettybluebirds
Excellent. This is an exciting story. I never read any of this before so am trying to piece it all together. I enjoyed what I read today. good work.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2016
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Excellent. This is an exciting story. I never read any of this before so am trying to piece it all together. I enjoyed what I read today. good work.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2016
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Where have you been? This is the start of my third Cody Schroder book.
Astatula and Missing can both be found in my portfolio and are the introduction, and mid-portion, of this story.
Glad you enjoyed this section. Stay tuned. Much more to come.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
I do feel lost and I don't understand why. Maybe confused. This is an excellent piece written with intrigue and style.
Just like all the others. Leaving us hanging
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2016
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I do feel lost and I don't understand why. Maybe confused. This is an excellent piece written with intrigue and style.
Just like all the others. Leaving us hanging
Comment Written 14-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2016
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That's because a chapter has not been released yet that ties the end of Missing into the beginning of Calling Card.
I can not release that chapter until after the 21st of July. But I will and you won't be lost any more.
Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from jlsavell
Brett, I am mesmerized and hooked. The tension and curiosity is building. I will be patient. Exceptional imagery and pov. So I will not ask any questions, just wait on the next post... Jimi
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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2016
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Brett, I am mesmerized and hooked. The tension and curiosity is building. I will be patient. Exceptional imagery and pov. So I will not ask any questions, just wait on the next post... Jimi
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Comment Written 14-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2016
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of the story.
The missing chapter will be released when I am allowed to release it.
Stay tuned. Much more to come.
