Little Poems
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Comment from Marykelly
The vulture is a pretty unpleasant looking bird and the role he plays in nature is even more unpleasant than his looks, but as you so well say in this poem without the vulture to clean the landscape there would be some pretty rotten consequences.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2016
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The vulture is a pretty unpleasant looking bird and the role he plays in nature is even more unpleasant than his looks, but as you so well say in this poem without the vulture to clean the landscape there would be some pretty rotten consequences.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2016
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Thank you Marykelly. We certainly agree on that.
Comment from enitsalemap
Once again a wonderful and witty poem and a great lesson in poetry writing as well. I look forward to everything you write and as soon as I know it is up I must read it! Your photo is great too. Thanks for this. By the way, Cat a strophe is a genius description.
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Once again a wonderful and witty poem and a great lesson in poetry writing as well. I look forward to everything you write and as soon as I know it is up I must read it! Your photo is great too. Thanks for this. By the way, Cat a strophe is a genius description.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2016
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Thank you enitsalemap. I appreciate your enthusiasm.
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you are welcome
Comment from brenda bickers
Hi TREISCHEL,
I think you are right, that is the most ugliest bird I have ever seen.
I think I would prefer to stick to our local road sweeper then have that flying around. lol
Great poem.
Brenda:))x
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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2016
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Hi TREISCHEL,
I think you are right, that is the most ugliest bird I have ever seen.
I think I would prefer to stick to our local road sweeper then have that flying around. lol
Great poem.
Brenda:))x
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Comment Written 08-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2016
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Thank you Brenda. I know what you mean.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
It is a great 'Cat-a-strophe'. The Vulture is 'ugly' but they do a very important task in nature. They clean up the scene after the predators are done. A great photo as well.
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It is a great 'Cat-a-strophe'. The Vulture is 'ugly' but they do a very important task in nature. They clean up the scene after the predators are done. A great photo as well.
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Comment Written 08-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2016
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Thank you Sandra. Indeed they do. You likely see more of them there than I do here.
Comment from TAB_that's me
Wow! You really have some vivid concrete imagery in this, especially in the first stanza.
It has some emotion to it as well.
I really liked it.
Teresa
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Wow! You really have some vivid concrete imagery in this, especially in the first stanza.
It has some emotion to it as well.
I really liked it.
Teresa
Comment Written 08-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2016
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Thank you very much Teresa. I am pkeased you liked it so well, and offered those wonderful 6 stars.
