One More Row To Hoe
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Comment from Brett Matthew West
"lifes" should be "life's" as it pertains to just one life.
Appears your father knew what he was talking about, and the lesson was learned.
Life is all about "one more row to hoe".
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2016
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"lifes" should be "life's" as it pertains to just one life.
Appears your father knew what he was talking about, and the lesson was learned.
Life is all about "one more row to hoe".
Comment Written 10-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2016
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Glad you seemed to like it.I thank you for your correctional help
Comment from Irish Rain
I really like the message here. How the father presses the boy not to quit, how life is a series of rows to hoe, and how we'll eventually reach that last row! Well done....blessings...
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I really like the message here. How the father presses the boy not to quit, how life is a series of rows to hoe, and how we'll eventually reach that last row! Well done....blessings...
Comment Written 10-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2016
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I most certainly thank you.Your comment was greatly appreciated
Comment from fionageorge
And your words certainly resonate with most of us who are now at that stage in life, where we have one more row to hoe, my friend. I loved this free flowing and well structured poem. Good solid rhyme scheme, but most importantly, a lovely message and an important one. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2016
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And your words certainly resonate with most of us who are now at that stage in life, where we have one more row to hoe, my friend. I loved this free flowing and well structured poem. Good solid rhyme scheme, but most importantly, a lovely message and an important one. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)
Comment Written 10-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2016
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To get this lovely comment from far away Australia means so much -thanks, so much
Comment from JLC EmeraldRiver
This poem describes the ways of life remarkably well with the use of a hoe, a reflection of our willpower. How true it is that we all have our own hoe with which we clear our path, and as we learn, fail, and gain experience, our hoeing skills improve and are tool is honed. But in addition to the unique metaphor of the hoe, this poem also touches up on the many up and downs in life. The going may seem daunting at first, with the incredible yet frightening journey still far from being complete, but time and effort guide us through, and our early experiences mature our character so that as the road grows rougher, our strength will be great enough to overcome it. At times, the path may seem too difficult to clear, and hardship hinders our progress, but time and effort guide us on once again. The poem finishes with the portrayal of the end of the path growing near, and shows how all our work helps us come to terms with life's most precious conclusion.
The charming rhyme scheme, coupled with the wording, worked to effectively convey the message of the piece. The structure was well thought-out with an emotional touch to each stanza. Well done!
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This poem describes the ways of life remarkably well with the use of a hoe, a reflection of our willpower. How true it is that we all have our own hoe with which we clear our path, and as we learn, fail, and gain experience, our hoeing skills improve and are tool is honed. But in addition to the unique metaphor of the hoe, this poem also touches up on the many up and downs in life. The going may seem daunting at first, with the incredible yet frightening journey still far from being complete, but time and effort guide us through, and our early experiences mature our character so that as the road grows rougher, our strength will be great enough to overcome it. At times, the path may seem too difficult to clear, and hardship hinders our progress, but time and effort guide us on once again. The poem finishes with the portrayal of the end of the path growing near, and shows how all our work helps us come to terms with life's most precious conclusion.
The charming rhyme scheme, coupled with the wording, worked to effectively convey the message of the piece. The structure was well thought-out with an emotional touch to each stanza. Well done!
Comment Written 09-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2016
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A tremendous review and I thank you for it and that great rating.You should get deeply into your writing. You very definitely
have what it takes
Comment from johnwilson
This was a captivating poem about our human condition as we age. The rhyming is never strained accept for your repeated usage of hoe. Thank you about your tribute to life.
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This was a captivating poem about our human condition as we age. The rhyming is never strained accept for your repeated usage of hoe. Thank you about your tribute to life.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2016
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You seemed to like it and that is enough-thank you
Comment from John Parkin
Mortal we are and you depicted the phases of life that all of us go through. You point out that a good foundation will carry us through all of life's trial and tribulations and heavens gate awaits. Your verses were separate ad unique and your rhyming was just right. I enjoyed your work.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2016
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Mortal we are and you depicted the phases of life that all of us go through. You point out that a good foundation will carry us through all of life's trial and tribulations and heavens gate awaits. Your verses were separate ad unique and your rhyming was just right. I enjoyed your work.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2016
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Thank you. Your comment and great rating brings inspiration
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Your welcome.
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Your welcome.
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
Hello Jaybird1,
This is an endearing write. It has a bittersweet quality to it. Yes, we learn life's lessons along the way, and we remember and utilize what we are taught by our parents in order to make it through life until the end of our time. "One More Row To Hoe" is a perfect title and an excellent premise for a write.
Well written with excellent rhyming and a smooth flow. You created good imagery for your reader, and have written something that everyone can relate to.
Well done!
Connie
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2016
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Hello Jaybird1,
This is an endearing write. It has a bittersweet quality to it. Yes, we learn life's lessons along the way, and we remember and utilize what we are taught by our parents in order to make it through life until the end of our time. "One More Row To Hoe" is a perfect title and an excellent premise for a write.
Well written with excellent rhyming and a smooth flow. You created good imagery for your reader, and have written something that everyone can relate to.
Well done!
Connie
Comment Written 09-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2016
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Thank you my friend-Igreatly appreciated it
Comment from dragonpoet
Sounds like your dad gave you a good lesson on life. He helped you grow and that lets you pay it forward to your family. A good legacy. There is always another row to hoe until the day you die. And then your hoe is picked up by someone else to continue what you started.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2016
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Sounds like your dad gave you a good lesson on life. He helped you grow and that lets you pay it forward to your family. A good legacy. There is always another row to hoe until the day you die. And then your hoe is picked up by someone else to continue what you started.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 09-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2016
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Great comment that was surely appreciated
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You're welcome.
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Comment from joannakruk
What a unique piece. I take it to, reflect the lessons one learned from one's father. Hard work, persistence, repetition of a task; following this routine will lead to success and is the foundation of a strong character.
Well done.
Jo
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2016
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What a unique piece. I take it to, reflect the lessons one learned from one's father. Hard work, persistence, repetition of a task; following this routine will lead to success and is the foundation of a strong character.
Well done.
Jo
Comment Written 09-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2016
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Thank you dear friend.Your words were very encouraging
Comment from nancyjam
Your father passed on an important lesson and your
beautiful, well-crafted poem passes it on.
Strong rhyme and meter in this thought-provoking read.
Nancy
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Your father passed on an important lesson and your
beautiful, well-crafted poem passes it on.
Strong rhyme and meter in this thought-provoking read.
Nancy
Comment Written 08-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2016
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Thank you Nancy for your encouraging comment-I really appreciated it
