Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi,

= So sorry for the young couple who lost their baby.
= It's so sad anytime someone passes, but children, it is nothing short of devastating.
= This is a lovely dedication.

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2016

2 people seem to know I wrote this. I thought it was for a blind contest - maybe it didn't get entered right. Thanks.

reply by Jacqueline M Franklin on 07-Jul-2016

That's odd. It came to my inbox. Blind entries aren't supposed to on to do that. Odd.

Did you get hold of Tom?

reply by the author on 07-Jul-2016

Tom fixed it. Thanks.

reply by Jacqueline M Franklin on 07-Jul-2016

Good.
I just went in and edited out your name. (*<*)

Comment from Bollie

Excellent

This is an excellent poem that asks the age old question, "why do bad things happen", but more importantly it describes how God's love helps all endure. Thank you for this enormously powerful message. GREAT JOB !!!!

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 Comment Written 07-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2016

Thank you:)

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

You did a good job with a difficult subject. Your lines flow well with good rhyme.

You expressed your feelings well.

Good job. The artwork is perfect.

Thanks for sharing & caring. Jan

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 Comment Written 07-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2016

Thank you Jan.