Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very interesting quinzaine poem you have penned. I was caught off guard with the first part of this. Very good wording and imagery. Good luck. Teri

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Jul-2016

thank you teri :)

Comment from Nika2016

Excellent

This is very good and the poet asks the essential question poetry brings to the reader...Do you hear my words unspoken?...Conversing with others through ink is sometimes a conundrum as each interprets in his/her own way, often missing the poet's mark or target. We only know writers through their words.
Poem initiates thought.
Nice work.

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Jul-2016

thank you nika :-)

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written Quinzaine Poem. Any poet or author write stories or poems with a meaning unwritten between the lines. The reader should be able to see the hidden message between the lines.

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Jul-2016

thank you sandra :-)

Comment from Bollie

Excellent

This is a lovely poem that is like describing a love letter. With just a few words you found a way to speak volumes. Great job!!!

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Jul-2016

cool! thank you robert :-)

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

I suppose this could be said and asked by any poet. Unless the poem is performed then it remains unspoken. In this case both statement and question are by the same character. This is not always the case in Quinzaine writting

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Jul-2016

thank you pg

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

On the surface you seem small enough for me to safely attack. The wisdom of my years warn me that things are rarely as simple as they may at first appear. Wisely I will show you the respect all beings deserve, thereby preserving my life.

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Jul-2016

lol! thank you nomi :-)

Comment from Susanne M. Psyris

Excellent

Excellent entry into the Quinzaine Poetry contest. Very deep and we all feel that way here sometimes. Good luck in the contest. God bless and hugs, Susanne

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Jul-2016

thank you susanne :-)

Comment from LateBloomer

Excellent

Hello shelley, Very good contest entry and thought-provoking question. The unspoken and the written between the lines is always intriguing ~ alluring. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Jul-2016

thank you lb :-)

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is a fine entry for a distant quinzaine contest
Exact syllables to the form
Good statement and good follow up question
Excellent art work to match
Well done
Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Jul-2016

yea, i always like to post early to make sure it's "perfect" lol thank you rsp :-)

Comment from LIJ Red

Excellent

Vintage cinquaine, I guess. Many later models have two questions...good time to make both acceptable.Sometimes the lines are harder to read than the betweens. Excellent.

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Jul-2016

thank you red :-)