Act of Endurance
Viewing comments for Chapter 32 "Light and Darkness"Dawn of Chaos
43 total reviews
Comment from greyson ernst
this is really really good i love it nice job and the picture is really perfect and as always keep writing and stay safe
sincerely Greyson Ernst :D
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2021
  |
this is really really good i love it nice job and the picture is really perfect and as always keep writing and stay safe
sincerely Greyson Ernst :D
Comment Written 07-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2021
-
Same to you, be safe. Thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed comments
Comment from lancellot
Hmm, I think this is the second such posting I have encountered today. This needs a more discernible order and train of thought. One that is common to the majority of reader for it to properly understood. If the author wants to fully communicate a message. It has to be in a way people can easily understand.
I recommend rewriting.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2020
 |
Hmm, I think this is the second such posting I have encountered today. This needs a more discernible order and train of thought. One that is common to the majority of reader for it to properly understood. If the author wants to fully communicate a message. It has to be in a way people can easily understand.
I recommend rewriting.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2020
-
I thank you for your consideration, suffering with aspects of communication, appreciating your advise. Thanking you for your generous rate despite those flaws
Comment from Earl Corp
This should have been a contest entry, Exploring the scientific theory behind creation could maybe shake your faith. Thank you for sharing. Very nice job. Stay safe and stay healthy.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2020
|
This should have been a contest entry, Exploring the scientific theory behind creation could maybe shake your faith. Thank you for sharing. Very nice job. Stay safe and stay healthy.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2020
-
The same to you be safe and healthy, given statements glad some aspects were appealing to your interests about this work. Thanking you for your generous rate and touching concerns.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This is a deep and well written poem. I love the thought that you put into your poem. You can really enjoy each line! This is a creative and well written poem. Great job.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
|
This is a deep and well written poem. I love the thought that you put into your poem. You can really enjoy each line! This is a creative and well written poem. Great job.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
-
The reality of its story is even greater stating why we are here. Thanking you for your generous rate and warming views.
Comment from lalajovanoski
wow this truly was well worthy of a six star rating. I found it to be uniquely written with a really nice rhyming flow throughout. leaves some emotions with me, about the light and the dark. thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2017
 |
wow this truly was well worthy of a six star rating. I found it to be uniquely written with a really nice rhyming flow throughout. leaves some emotions with me, about the light and the dark. thanks for sharing
Comment Written 17-May-2017
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2017
-
I thank you for you touching words, even though revisions are needed: also you generous rate and welcomed remarks.
Comment from KyColonel Randal
Thank you for sharing. I know this selection is not for a contest, but if by chance you decide to enter a contest, my advice would be to insert line breaks to where the lines are even. I would also use a darker background which is not flesh-colored and make your font bigger, bold, and white.
reply by the author on 17-May-2017
|
Thank you for sharing. I know this selection is not for a contest, but if by chance you decide to enter a contest, my advice would be to insert line breaks to where the lines are even. I would also use a darker background which is not flesh-colored and make your font bigger, bold, and white.
Comment Written 16-May-2017
reply by the author on 17-May-2017
-
Too many pits in my write for a contest, reading your considerations about its appearance, don't really understand the reversal of fonts. Yet, after resolving pits I will.bring this view back suggested. Thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed remarks.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
The existence of water, the order of creation, the state of the sky and ground relate to Spirit and Angel, as it is opined that the Day and Night was the Host of Adam; clarified the state of light and darkness; expressed good.
reply by the author on 07-May-2017
|
The existence of water, the order of creation, the state of the sky and ground relate to Spirit and Angel, as it is opined that the Day and Night was the Host of Adam; clarified the state of light and darkness; expressed good.
Comment Written 04-May-2017
reply by the author on 07-May-2017
-
I had my doubts about its clarity. Thanking you for your generous rate and touching thoughts.
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Light and Darkness, leaves thinking me or also me and under these I am and I was between with the in-between neither nor nine times nine.
reply by the author on 07-May-2017
|
This poem, Light and Darkness, leaves thinking me or also me and under these I am and I was between with the in-between neither nor nine times nine.
Comment Written 04-May-2017
reply by the author on 07-May-2017
-
And when you get to the bottom of all said, quite an adventure to be had by proclaimed eternals. Thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed remarks defining this write.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Some so loved the darkness confusion, rather reality in light, in dark tale by they of those having no had vision. ... Yeah, and I happen to be one of "them", TPAC. I must disagree with you however concerning the lack of vision.
I know exactly what I'm doing...
Nice writing. Keep up the good work!
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
|
Some so loved the darkness confusion, rather reality in light, in dark tale by they of those having no had vision. ... Yeah, and I happen to be one of "them", TPAC. I must disagree with you however concerning the lack of vision.
I know exactly what I'm doing...
Nice writing. Keep up the good work!
Comment Written 26-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
-
Not a personal thought, the Holy Text genesis for the creation of the heaven and the earth by God. But if the feeling makes your smooth- groove on. Thanking you for your generous rate and touching thoughts.
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
You've penned a GREAT poem.
Well-written.
'Light and Darkness'- There's definitely a difference between the two.
The author's notes are appreciated.- Thank you!
Thanks for sharing.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2017
|
You've penned a GREAT poem.
Well-written.
'Light and Darkness'- There's definitely a difference between the two.
The author's notes are appreciated.- Thank you!
Thanks for sharing.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
Comment Written 25-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2017
-
Thank you for your generous rate and welcomed remarks. I appreciate the thought of the write being a poem.
