Comment from IndianaIrish

Excellent

Your photograph is wonderful, Treischel. I enjoyed your egret poem and especially liked the descriptive imagery and the different titles you gave this amazing bird.
Smiles,
Indy :-)

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2016

Thank you Indy.

Comment from nancy_e_davis

Excellent

My brain is too tired to delve into what makes this poem so nice Tom. That is an interesting picture.. I had an Egret stop at my duck pond one day. I guess it was migrating. Beautiful bird. You are really good at Photography. You have a great eye.Well done. Nancy

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2016

Thank you Nancy for a fine review and sweet compliment.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A great poem about the Egret and its routine of seeking food for dinner. With the first sense of danger he lift himself and flies away. A great capture to compliment your poem.

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 Comment Written 01-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2016

Thank you Sandra. I was disappointed that when I posted, the picture came out fuzzy,

reply by Sandra du Plessis on 01-Jul-2016

It looks fine on my tablet. The main idea is the action to lift off.

Comment from P1

Excellent

thank you for your authors notes
it's seldom that one has a chance to
take out the camera and capture a shot
such as this. certainly inspired your
poetic mind. this was a pleasure to
read and review

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 Comment Written 01-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2016

Thank you Paige,