Comment from Lynn27

Excellent

An interesting poem you have written here. I liked how you expressed yourself in your lines. The details are great that drew me in.

Happy Writing,

Lynn

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2016

Thanks so much Lynn, for the lovely review and comments

Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

I don't think you could have chosen a better description for a clay vessel - we are vessels and we are designed by the Almighty's hand. Your rhyme is flawless and so is the meter I wish you the best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2016

Thanks so much Dawn, for the lovely review and comments

reply by Dawn Munro on 30-Jun-2016

You're welcome.

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is good imagery and descriptive scheme. Good luck in your contest.

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2016

Thanks so much Charlie, for the lovely review and comments

Comment from Leineco

Excellent

For the life of me - I could not figure out how to work with this
prompt question! But you have done it brilliantly!!! :-)

Because God made me from the dust,
a vessel formed and made from clay,
I'm fashioned -- shaped, to look this way.

[Yes, I'm] unique, the way I'm draped;
I'm moulded by the potter's hand-

Very cllever approach and written in wonderful meter :-)

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2016

Thanks so much for the lovely review and comments

Comment from flylikeaneagle

Excellent

Mystery writer: wow, what a great clay jar you are! Shaped by the master's
hands from dust with His breath to give you life! You and I are uniquely made.
I like your line of "to one day walk eternal's land"...meet you there!

God bless! flylikeaneagle

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2016

Thanks so much Nancy, for the lovely review and comments

Comment from Oatmeal

Excellent

You did a wonderful job with this challenge. The flow was very nice. The theme was good. Very well formatted and full of descriptive narrations. The artwork complemented your poem. Thoughts are expressed and described well.

There was no SPAG. No typos. No homophones. No problems at all.

I look forward to seeing you again.

Love you,

Oatmeal

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2016

Thanks so much for the lovely review and comments

Comment from Kaydoe

Excellent

A Lovely well written poem, "What is a Clay vessel" There is so much spiritual
truth to your poem. It reads and rhymes nicely. Good luck with the contest!

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2016

Thanks so much for the lovely review and comments

Comment from Eternal Muse

Excellent

Oh, this is such perfection. Total harmony of the form and contents. I admired your wonderful rhyming, flow, meter, cadence, and the great imagery.

This should make one of the top contenders.

Good luck.

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2016

Thanks so much for the lovely review and comments

Comment from poetsteve15

Exceptional

Don't we all be that some day. A great poem and a great read. A very nice picture to go with it that helps finish the story. Well done GB
I'm moulded (molded) by the potter's hand-
to one day walk eternal's land.

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2016

Thanks so much Steve, for the msrvellous review and comments, and the msrvellous six, Moulded is UK English,

reply by poetsteve15 on 03-Jul-2016

Ok that is why don't take anything away when I think I see a mistake because in your case it was not it would been mine.

Comment from zanya

Excellent

A most interesting angle on the Clay Vessel poetry contest -a sense of immediacy is conveyed in the clever use of dialogue and the use of the 1st person narrative - beautiful pic

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2016

Thanks so much for the lovely review and comments