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Just a clay vessel.

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Comment from brownies
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Very nice! I am glad you enjoy the blessing and peace of knowing you are the creation of a Potter who knows your purpose and that you were created intentionally and specifically for Him. Though we make mistakes, we are not a mistake. I am not sure I understand the pinch of lust because I do not find that God possessed a pinch or any lust. Please explain. Thank you! Great job!

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 29-Jun-2016
    Thanks so much for the lovely review and comments
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very good poem that you have penned. There is a Christian song titled "He didn't throw the clay away." You used very good descriptive wording and imagery. Teri

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 29-Jun-2016
    Thanks so much Teri, for the lovely review and comments
Comment from Pantygynt
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Hm! I think I know where this one came from. Rhyming couplets and iambic tetrameters explain a religious them in an extended metaphor with a quotation from Isaiah in the notes. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 29-Jun-2016
    Thanks so much Jim, for the lovely review and comments
Comment from VictoriaJoyce
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Very well written, and very well put. I'm glad you referred to the bible reference. I think you explained it well in your writing. The message; Yes, God has made me just the way I am. He loves me just the way I am. Therefore, I am to love me just the way I am. Even so, He is still molding me and changing me.

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 29-Jun-2016
    Thanks Victoria for these most encouraging words, review and generous.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A well-written poem. We are formed by the master potter from clay. The vessel of clay tat carries the most precious jewel, our souls.

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 Comment Written 29-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 29-Jun-2016
    Thanks Sandra for these great comments and review.