( will you marry me? )
haiku2 total reviews
Comment from cumulus365
Your nature haiku meets the syllabic count and its imagery. Your line 1 and line 2 make up the story. Line 3 tells the connection back to line 1. A simple poetry of imagery.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2016
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Your nature haiku meets the syllabic count and its imagery. Your line 1 and line 2 make up the story. Line 3 tells the connection back to line 1. A simple poetry of imagery.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2016
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Thanks for the insightful review, it was a fun write, cheers, j
Comment from chcbeck
A creative approach to this contest which I like a lot. You have achieved the contest prompt. You can picture the sky writing as you read. Great job. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2016
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A creative approach to this contest which I like a lot. You have achieved the contest prompt. You can picture the sky writing as you read. Great job. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2016
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Thanks for the review, it was sky writing or a red kite, cheers, j
