Astatula (Final Edition)
Viewing comments for Chapter 48 "Cabin Fever"A young boy tries to turn his life around.Can he?
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Comment from Roxanna Andrews
I just know that Bee-Bo is going to get Cody while he is out getting the groceries isn't he?! If I were watching this I TV I'd be yelling, "Don't go out there!" Because now Bee-Bo knows he's alive because that bad DR told him. I guess I'll just go read it and find out. Well done as always.
reply by the author on 07-May-2018
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I just know that Bee-Bo is going to get Cody while he is out getting the groceries isn't he?! If I were watching this I TV I'd be yelling, "Don't go out there!" Because now Bee-Bo knows he's alive because that bad DR told him. I guess I'll just go read it and find out. Well done as always.
Comment Written 02-May-2018
reply by the author on 07-May-2018
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter. Appreciate your comments and support.
Comment from judiverse
Daniels went through a lot of elaborate planning with the newspaper coverage of Cody's death and than the funeral. He's gone to great lengths to keep Cody's whereabouts secret, but will Bee-Bo fine it? Will Cody do something to become a target again. He has improved rapidly after the coma, but he has a hard time staying out of trouble. Will his tendency to go bare footed give him away? Great villain you have going in this. judi
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2016
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Daniels went through a lot of elaborate planning with the newspaper coverage of Cody's death and than the funeral. He's gone to great lengths to keep Cody's whereabouts secret, but will Bee-Bo fine it? Will Cody do something to become a target again. He has improved rapidly after the coma, but he has a hard time staying out of trouble. Will his tendency to go bare footed give him away? Great villain you have going in this. judi
Comment Written 02-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2016
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of the story. Your comments and support appreciated.
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You're very welcome. Great story. Happy trails. judi
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You're very welcome. Great story. Happy trails. judi
Comment from Ulla
Great, I'm back in the story having read a few previous chapters, so I'm fully up to speed. A great stunt they pulled at the funeral. I'm now looking forward to read the next chapter. All the best. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2016
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Great, I'm back in the story having read a few previous chapters, so I'm fully up to speed. A great stunt they pulled at the funeral. I'm now looking forward to read the next chapter. All the best. Ulla:))
Comment Written 30-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2016
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Glad to have you back and that you enjoyed this portion of the story. Now, don't leave again or you will miss something you won't want to miss. So much more to come.
Comment from barkingdog
Your story is progressing nicely. The ruse they have played on Bee-Bo seems to be working. I hope it continues, but what if Bee-Bo follows them to the cabin?
Guess, I'll have to keep reading to find out.
Excellent dialogue.
:) e
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2016
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Your story is progressing nicely. The ruse they have played on Bee-Bo seems to be working. I hope it continues, but what if Bee-Bo follows them to the cabin?
Guess, I'll have to keep reading to find out.
Excellent dialogue.
:) e
Comment Written 28-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2016
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Stay tuned. No telling what The Clown may do. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from misscookie
Hurrah He lives!!
You got me good again.
This is one of the best stories I have read.
You have my attention from the start and few times almost stopped my heart.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2016
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Hurrah He lives!!
You got me good again.
This is one of the best stories I have read.
You have my attention from the start and few times almost stopped my heart.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 28-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2016
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Glad you enjoyed this misscookie.
Comment from MizKat
Hi Brett,
This was another really great chapter to read. Your story is sure good and of course I look forward to reading more of it. They are a joy to read as you're really wonderful at writing them.
Kat
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2016
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Hi Brett,
This was another really great chapter to read. Your story is sure good and of course I look forward to reading more of it. They are a joy to read as you're really wonderful at writing them.
Kat
Comment Written 28-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2016
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Appreciate your comments and support.
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I answered this but I don't remember if I posted it or not. So I'll say thanks again. Kat
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Ha! I was thinking after reading the last chapter you could have pretended he was dead. I didn't want to lose him either. Good job Brett. It is good to hide Beth as well because he
would do her harm too. xx nancy
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2016
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Ha! I was thinking after reading the last chapter you could have pretended he was dead. I didn't want to lose him either. Good job Brett. It is good to hide Beth as well because he
would do her harm too. xx nancy
Comment Written 28-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2016
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of the story. Stay tuned. Much more to come.
Comment from MTF1955
I'm so glad my favorite character is alive. I sure was hoping it was all a rues. Now I can't wait to see what Brock is going to do to BeeBo. Great job. Mary
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2016
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I'm so glad my favorite character is alive. I sure was hoping it was all a rues. Now I can't wait to see what Brock is going to do to BeeBo. Great job. Mary
Comment Written 27-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2016
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of the story. Much more to come. A certain clown needs to be dealt with now.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
I knew it deep in my mind that this was a ruse.
Now to catch the villlin and get on with their lives.
Excellent intrigue and writing. No problems noted
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2016
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I knew it deep in my mind that this was a ruse.
Now to catch the villlin and get on with their lives.
Excellent intrigue and writing. No problems noted
Comment Written 27-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2016
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of the story. Now to catch a certain evil villain.
Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
Well, well Brett, you sure pulled the wool over everyone's eyes with hidden Cody trick. A truly masterful ploy and now I feel better with him being alive. I think this will help keep Brock grounded in his pursuit of the Clown, Bee-Bo. Excellent story and for me a superb ending!
Well done Brett,,,,,,,Jim
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2016
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Well, well Brett, you sure pulled the wool over everyone's eyes with hidden Cody trick. A truly masterful ploy and now I feel better with him being alive. I think this will help keep Brock grounded in his pursuit of the Clown, Bee-Bo. Excellent story and for me a superb ending!
Well done Brett,,,,,,,Jim
Comment Written 27-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2016
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of this story. Much more to come so stay tuned. Your comments and support appreciated.
