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Comment from Unspoken94
I like the way that you use the phrase again and again
but it doesn't overwhelm the whole of the poem. Rather
it continues to let the reader imagine looking at the cross
with our own issues. Thank you, Teri. -Bill
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016
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I like the way that you use the phrase again and again
but it doesn't overwhelm the whole of the poem. Rather
it continues to let the reader imagine looking at the cross
with our own issues. Thank you, Teri. -Bill
Comment Written 26-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016
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Thank you Bill for the great review. Teri
Comment from royowen
I agree emphatically Teri. There really is just one place to run, the cross is the only place. I love the fact in Christ we have certainty, in the world we have, as you say, chaos. The boundaries in the world are in a state of flux. Well done, Teri, you are a great source of encouragement, beautifully written in expressive devotion to God, great worship language and a sweet arrow to the cross, in aabb rhyming, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2016
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I agree emphatically Teri. There really is just one place to run, the cross is the only place. I love the fact in Christ we have certainty, in the world we have, as you say, chaos. The boundaries in the world are in a state of flux. Well done, Teri, you are a great source of encouragement, beautifully written in expressive devotion to God, great worship language and a sweet arrow to the cross, in aabb rhyming, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 25-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2016
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Thank you for the great review my friend. Teri
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Most welcome
Comment from damommy
A poem that should make anyone feel better. I couldn't agree more with everything you said.
That's the very place I turn to whether happy or sad. Works, doesn't it. 8-)
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2016
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A poem that should make anyone feel better. I couldn't agree more with everything you said.
That's the very place I turn to whether happy or sad. Works, doesn't it. 8-)
Comment Written 25-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2016
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Thank you my friend. Yes it truly does. hugs, Teri
Comment from A.A.A.EXHILARATING RIDE
I love the picture, as most of Angelheart's it speaks to many needs and dimensions. And, sharing your words, I feel again the expansion of my life above the cross to realise my greater purpose than must be realised, achieved and embodied to change that chaos as existed in the infancy of this world when Christ walked alone, under-standing and anchoring our God, co-creative potential through our Word and communion in language of life and choice. Thank you so much for sharing, and bonding your gifts into that shining star of love, light and life, Maureen*&*
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2016
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I love the picture, as most of Angelheart's it speaks to many needs and dimensions. And, sharing your words, I feel again the expansion of my life above the cross to realise my greater purpose than must be realised, achieved and embodied to change that chaos as existed in the infancy of this world when Christ walked alone, under-standing and anchoring our God, co-creative potential through our Word and communion in language of life and choice. Thank you so much for sharing, and bonding your gifts into that shining star of love, light and life, Maureen*&*
Comment Written 25-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2016
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Thank you Maureen for the great review. hugs, Teri
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You too, Teri! Have a great week, Maureen*&*
Comment from foxangie123
How very uplifting and a lovely piece of writing. It is heartwarming. You have such outstanding faith as it radiates through each write. It is great. Your little G, I hope he knows what a wonderful granny he has.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2016
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How very uplifting and a lovely piece of writing. It is heartwarming. You have such outstanding faith as it radiates through each write. It is great. Your little G, I hope he knows what a wonderful granny he has.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2016
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lol thank you for the great review and for putting a smile on my face. I was just sitting her missing him. hugs, Teri
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Teri
=Beautifully told testimony of your faith.
=You cannot go wrong with Angelheart's and ev murry's artwork.
=Well penned and presented, my friend.
(*<*) A Smile Is A Frown Turned Upside-Down (*>*)
Cheers & Blessings ... Jacqueline ~ Jackie ~ Jax
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2016
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Hi, Teri
=Beautifully told testimony of your faith.
=You cannot go wrong with Angelheart's and ev murry's artwork.
=Well penned and presented, my friend.
(*<*) A Smile Is A Frown Turned Upside-Down (*>*)
Cheers & Blessings ... Jacqueline ~ Jackie ~ Jax
Comment Written 25-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2016
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Thank you my friend. hugs, Teri
Comment from Ric Myworld
Thanks for sharing another of your fine poems that witnesses and reminds us of our wonderful blessing of forgiveness and the sacrifice Jesus made for everyone of us. Great job. :-)
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2016
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Thanks for sharing another of your fine poems that witnesses and reminds us of our wonderful blessing of forgiveness and the sacrifice Jesus made for everyone of us. Great job. :-)
Comment Written 25-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2016
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Thank you Ric for the great review. hugs, Teri
Comment from AnnieDawn
What a beautiful tribute to the Lord. You have written a wonderful poem and have a natural talent for putting feelings on paper. Maybe a little work on flow and rhyme and it would be perfect. Have you tried free flow without the rhyme. Your poem seems like a good fit into that category if the rhyme was dropped. Keep up the good work. It is needed on the site.
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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2016
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What a beautiful tribute to the Lord. You have written a wonderful poem and have a natural talent for putting feelings on paper. Maybe a little work on flow and rhyme and it would be perfect. Have you tried free flow without the rhyme. Your poem seems like a good fit into that category if the rhyme was dropped. Keep up the good work. It is needed on the site.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2016
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Thank you for the good review and your help. Hugs, Teri
Comment from Bill Schott
This spiritual poem, I Look to the Cross, has great significance for people today. It seems we are shifting sands in world affairs, when every day seems like Opposite Day. It's good to have a steady target to shoot for.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2016
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This spiritual poem, I Look to the Cross, has great significance for people today. It seems we are shifting sands in world affairs, when every day seems like Opposite Day. It's good to have a steady target to shoot for.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2016
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Thank you Bill for the great review. Teri
Comment from heyjude
Teri, the blood of the perfect lamb of God brings us forgiveness. We do look to the cross. Another great spiritual poem with a message that touches me
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2016
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Teri, the blood of the perfect lamb of God brings us forgiveness. We do look to the cross. Another great spiritual poem with a message that touches me
Comment Written 25-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2016
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Thank you my friend. hugs, Teri
