Astatula (Final Edition)
Viewing comments for Chapter 47 "Blond Death "A young boy tries to turn his life around.Can he?
16 total reviews
Comment from judiverse
Oh, my. It looks as if Bee-Bo now has something in mind for Beth. Cody's funeral scene is so touching that Beth and Daniels seem as much affected as if he had actually died. The newspaper has been a help in putting out the story. Donating the toys also makes it seem real. We'll see if Daniels' plan leads anywhere. He has Bee-Bo to worry about now. judi
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2016
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Oh, my. It looks as if Bee-Bo now has something in mind for Beth. Cody's funeral scene is so touching that Beth and Daniels seem as much affected as if he had actually died. The newspaper has been a help in putting out the story. Donating the toys also makes it seem real. We'll see if Daniels' plan leads anywhere. He has Bee-Bo to worry about now. judi
Comment Written 30-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2016
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of the story. Stay tuned much more to come.
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Very compelling story, with lots of excitement brewing. Happy trails. judi
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Very compelling story, with lots of excitement brewing. Happy trails. judi
Comment from light
This is a very interesting read. It's hard to say I enjoyed it do to the subject matter. It is very well written and keeps the interest to the end. I hope to read more.
Elaine
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2016
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This is a very interesting read. It's hard to say I enjoyed it do to the subject matter. It is very well written and keeps the interest to the end. I hope to read more.
Elaine
Comment Written 29-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2016
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of the story. Much more to come so stay tuned. And ENJOY! So many FanStorians are.
Comment from Sankey
Good chapter. I feel quite certain I missed this for some reason as I know Cody still lives in the next chapter. But a good read anyway I had wondered if BeeBo was around someplace.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2016
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Good chapter. I feel quite certain I missed this for some reason as I know Cody still lives in the next chapter. But a good read anyway I had wondered if BeeBo was around someplace.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2016
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Keep your comments and support coming! They are appreciated.
Comment from MizKat
Hi Brett,
Well I read your last two chapters the wrong way. Instead of reading this one first I read the other one. Oh well, I enjoyed both of them and I'll be looking forward to more of your work.
Kat
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2016
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Hi Brett,
Well I read your last two chapters the wrong way. Instead of reading this one first I read the other one. Oh well, I enjoyed both of them and I'll be looking forward to more of your work.
Kat
Comment Written 28-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2016
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of the story. Much more to come.
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I'll look forward to what you write next.
Kat
Comment from Ric Myworld
You had me from the first line and it never let go. This is one of those chapters that is interesting and well written, but the subject matter makes it hard for me to enjoy Cody being put to rest. Maybe I'm just waiting for Bee-Bo to be hung by his testicles from a helicopter. Great job. :-)
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2016
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You had me from the first line and it never let go. This is one of those chapters that is interesting and well written, but the subject matter makes it hard for me to enjoy Cody being put to rest. Maybe I'm just waiting for Bee-Bo to be hung by his testicles from a helicopter. Great job. :-)
Comment Written 27-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2016
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That would be too good for Bee-Bo but a provocative notion????? Glad you enjoyed this portion of the story. Much more to come.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
A very sad story about poor Cody. I had so hoped he was going to survive the attack. It happens, though, the demise of the innocent in such a battle of good against evil. And speaking of evil, Bee-Bo isn't finished with his mischief. The story goes on,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2016
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A very sad story about poor Cody. I had so hoped he was going to survive the attack. It happens, though, the demise of the innocent in such a battle of good against evil. And speaking of evil, Bee-Bo isn't finished with his mischief. The story goes on,
Rhonda
Comment Written 26-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2016
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of the story. Stay tuned. Much more to come. Appreciate your comments and support.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
:NO what have you done?
Never!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Unless he is not dead but the casket was open.
I hope it is a ploy to catch BEE=Bo
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2016
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:NO what have you done?
Never!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Unless he is not dead but the casket was open.
I hope it is a ploy to catch BEE=Bo
Comment Written 26-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2016
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Story line movement. As you now know.
Any way, glad you enjoyed this portion of the story.
Kill of Cody?
I would be lynched by a whole lot of FanStorians if I dared do that!
Too many of them have fallen in love with the little tyke.
I have been told I can put him through anything I want to.
I just can not dispose of him.
So looks like Cody will be hanging around.
Comment from MTF1955
Can't be! My favorite little guy can't be dead. That was a very emotional and sad chapter. Can't wait for Brock to nail BeeBo hope he takes his time killing him. Mary
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2016
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Can't be! My favorite little guy can't be dead. That was a very emotional and sad chapter. Can't wait for Brock to nail BeeBo hope he takes his time killing him. Mary
Comment Written 26-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2016
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Cody's death was faked for story line purposes.
I have been told by too many FanStorians I can put Cody through anything I want to.
I just can not kill him off.
So he will be staying around.
I don't wish to be lynched by his readers!
Appreciate your comments, support, and the 6 Stars.
Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
Brett, this caught me by surprise. I didn't think he was going to die. I already have that clown. I truly home that sometime in this story, Brock puts him down for good. Excellent but very sad.
Well done Brett! Have a great evening,,,,,jim
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2016
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Brett, this caught me by surprise. I didn't think he was going to die. I already have that clown. I truly home that sometime in this story, Brock puts him down for good. Excellent but very sad.
Well done Brett! Have a great evening,,,,,jim
Comment Written 26-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2016
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I couldn't kill of Cody for real.
Too many FanStorians have fallen in love with that little tyke.
So I used this scene for story line purposes.
Glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from create4christ
I'm so sad, Brett! I didnt expect this at all! I expected, even after all the talk about Cody's death, that this was all a nightmare and Cody would still be alive. Cody wasn't supposed to die! As always, your characters and scenery are all carefully fleshed out. I am drawn to continue reading. I enjoy your work.
Thank you for sharing, Friend.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2016
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I'm so sad, Brett! I didnt expect this at all! I expected, even after all the talk about Cody's death, that this was all a nightmare and Cody would still be alive. Cody wasn't supposed to die! As always, your characters and scenery are all carefully fleshed out. I am drawn to continue reading. I enjoy your work.
Thank you for sharing, Friend.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2016
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of the story.
As you know Cody did not really die.
I could not kill him off.
Too many FanStorians have fallen in love with the little tyke.
So I used this scene for story line movement purposes.
