Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

This is a very well written piece. Technically sound, but more importantly the tone is engaging with a solid story behind it.

Best of luck
GMG

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2016

Thank you, my friend. A good review from you means a lot to me. I changed the title to Purr-fect Love. It goes with the story better. I also edited and changed a few spots.

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

A very original plot for a story, the kind of plot that made me wonder " why didn't I think of that for a story." Very thought provoking. A very moving true story.

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2016

Thank you. This is a true story so I didn't have to think of a plot.LOL I changed the title to Purr-Fect Love. It fits the story better.

Comment from Tpa

Exceptional

Absolutely superb!! It was a heartwarming story with a beautiful ending. I thought your descriptions of the kittens were marvelously written. I especially enjoyed your creation of the name Zip. Good luck in your contest.

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2016

Thank you. I changed the title of this story to Purr-Fect Love. I also went through and re-wrote a few spots. This is a true story about a real cat. I never before saw a cat who loved like Zip did. Thank you for the six stars. I appreciate them very much.

Comment from foxangie123

Excellent

Those little sweet kitties in your pictures look like Himalayan kittens. This entire presentation is a great story and entry as prompted. Bravo.

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2016

Thank you. I changed the title to Purr-Fect Love. It fits the story better than the old title. Thank you for reading and commenting.

Comment from MTF1955

Excellent

Since I'm a cat and dog person I loved this story./ Animals I find bring out the best in people. They love us unconditionally which is more than we can say about humans. Great job. Mary

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2016

Thank you. I changed the title to Purr-Fect Love. It fits the story better. Some animals are truly unique and Zip was one of them. I miss her so much.

Comment from create4christ

Excellent

I love kitties! Your picture is precious. Your Kit sounds precious, too. I love how she made your aunt's last days so sweet. This was a very sweet story!

Thank you for sharing, Friend.

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2016

Thank you. I changed the title to Purr-Fect Love. It fits the story better than the old title. I went through and made a few other changes too. Zip was a special cat. Thank you for caring.

reply by create4christ on 22-Jun-2016

You're welcome...and I like the name change.

Comment from cterp

Exceptional

My first six-star rating! This Zip stole my heart, and so did your story.

I did notice one missing word: you want it to read nursing home, but the word home is missing: "I talked to Zip on the ride to the nursing and she gave me..."

May I suggest one small edit? Cut the third sentence from the end ("I'm so glad I found..." It doesn't add anything to the essay; it's obvious that you are glad you found her and this sentence just gets in the way.

Wonderful story and so appropriate to this contest. Good luck.

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2016

Thank you for the six stars and the tips. I changed the title to Purr-Fect Love because it fits the story better. I will edit and correct my mistakes.

reply by cterp on 22-Jun-2016

Purr-fection!

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Animals have proven their worth in healing energy. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. Good luck in your contest.

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2016

Thank you. I changed the title to Purr-Fect Love. It fits the story better. Thanks for reading and commenting.

Comment from zanya

Excellent

What an intriguing tale of how such a simple act can change the world into a better
place for some lonely soul filled with longing for other days and other experiences -a joy to read

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2016

Thank you. I changed the title to Purr-Fect Love, it fits the story better. Glad you liked the story. It is true and there really was a cat named Zip who loved everyone unconditionally.

Comment from Belinda

Excellent

I bet this is a true story. it's so enjoyable to read. I like the trip Zip took to the nursing home, and the 'calamity' it roused. The way you wrote it, I can see the episode in my mind's eye. Bravo, Writer, and good luck.

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2016

Thank you, Belinda. It is a true story of my cat, Zip. I never saw a cat with an attitude like hers. She loved everyone she met even if they sis not like cats. Figure that one out. I changed the title to Purr-Fect Love, it fits the story better.