Comment from Walu Feral

Excellent

Hahahaha! G'day Shari. That's so funny and the picture matches it perfectly. I asked Delia the same question when I turned forty lol. Great contest entry mate and I wish you luck in it.

Well done.

Cheers Fez

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2016

I hoped Delia said yes. :-)
Afraid all that facial hair would turn me off. LOL

reply by Walu Feral on 21-Jun-2016

Hahahaha! She's made me shave it about 4 bloody times! lol. She even bought an electric razor and didn't tell me when we were in Australia, little shit! I think she's gonna be at my beard again!

reply by the author on 21-Jun-2016

Hey, be glad she's not using a straight edge. I used to make my hubby shave the jungle under his arms.

reply by Walu Feral on 21-Jun-2016

lol. With a straight edge? Was it sharp hahahaha! Poor bugger.

reply by the author on 21-Jun-2016

Yep. He had to but some it off with scissors. Or maybe I did. I brought him an expensive electric six months ago, but I've shaving it now and find it relaxes me. Not sure about him. Ha,ha.

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

You made a better fist of this than I did! A nice touch of humour and an even nicer touch of undying love. You've managed to cram quite a bit into this pernicious form!

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2016

Thanks, Tony. It took many tries to come up with something that made sense.

Comment from MacMhuirich

Excellent

I love this, what a good write for the contest, wonderful wording with a good sprinkle of humour. Thank you for sharing and best wishes for the contest.
Bless you
John

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2016

Thanks, John. You look sexy. I'm not lying. :-)

Comment from Domino 2

Excellent

I'm not sure if this is in fun or serious, Shari, as the lady in the picture looks distant and may have dementia, and therefore be unable to lie, OR the guy is just asking her to humour him.

Anyway, it got my remaining brain cells going this early in the morning.

Cheers, Ray xx

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2016

In fun, Ray. Now, how's your sex life? LOL

Comment from Zue65

Excellent

My goodness, I love the picture of these two grannies, still in love with each other. I enjoyed the wit and humor of the author as he infused it perfectly in this Quinzaine poem. Good luck in the contest, God bless.

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2016

Thanks, nassus. A hard form to work with, for sure.

Comment from Hayley Solomon

Excellent

Excellent! Well done! Humour and accuracy of quinzaine. I hope you do find yourself alive at ninety five with a perfect partner by your side! (Not necessarily lying!)

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2016

AT ninety-five, I want a boy toy. No doubt about it. :-)

Comment from Unspoken94

Excellent

I turn 71 soon and I'm asking the same damn question!!
A wonderful picture and Quinzaine. All the best in
the contest. -Bill

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2016

You don't look that old, Bill. And that is a turn on for me. :-) Glad this challenging poem stirred up your mind and maybe something else. Who knows?

Comment from janalma

Excellent

Cute and funny. At ninety-five, he sure is tempting fate. Probably best if she says no. Lol. I do wish them well, tho. Succinct proposition, you have here.

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2016

Thanks, janal. He is tempting fate. Still a simple kiss won't give him a heart attack. :-)

Comment from Jay Squires

Excellent

What's not to love with that couple? I didn't count your syllables, Shari, but I'm sure you took the time. You sure knocked a home run with the humor, though.

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 Comment Written 21-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2016

Thanks, Jay. I counted three times. :-)

Comment from barkingdog

Excellent

This is an interesting form. I had to look it up.
It looks like you nailed it, Shari.
Besides that you made me smile. Always good for any poem in a contest.

Good luck, my friend.

:)e

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 Comment Written 21-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2016

Thanks, Ellen. This form was a tough nut to crack!