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Comment from Juliette Chamberlain
Interesting story line which makes me want to understand more about the background.
What has made Lady Lenore decide to live in a cave rather than a castle?
You develop the story well.
'...the (bowls) bowels of the earth...'
'Devonshire.' All one word.
Warmly,
Juliette
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2016
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Interesting story line which makes me want to understand more about the background.
What has made Lady Lenore decide to live in a cave rather than a castle?
You develop the story well.
'...the (bowls) bowels of the earth...'
'Devonshire.' All one word.
Warmly,
Juliette
Comment Written 18-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2016
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Thank you for your kind words and the excellent rating. Suggested editing will be done.
Comment from Zue65
Stories about castles, kings, queens, prince and princess are always magical and will attract any readers curiosity like you did here. The adventures and fantastic scenes or episodes will be looked forward to by the expectant readers. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2016
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Stories about castles, kings, queens, prince and princess are always magical and will attract any readers curiosity like you did here. The adventures and fantastic scenes or episodes will be looked forward to by the expectant readers. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2016
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Thank you for your kind words and your excellent rating.
