Astatula (Final Edition)
Viewing comments for Chapter 40 "Coma - Part Two"A young boy tries to turn his life around.Can he?
10 total reviews
Comment from Lynn27
There another great addition to your story. I feel connected to your characters and find myself hoping for Cody to awake too.
Another great chapter you have here,
Lynn
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2016
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There another great addition to your story. I feel connected to your characters and find myself hoping for Cody to awake too.
Another great chapter you have here,
Lynn
Comment Written 16-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2016
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of the story. Much more to come so stay tuned.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Excellently written and no problems noted.
I am so hooked on this that I look for it first to read and see where you are taking us today.
Very interesting and well done
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2016
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Excellently written and no problems noted.
I am so hooked on this that I look for it first to read and see where you are taking us today.
Very interesting and well done
Comment Written 16-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2016
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Glad you are enjoying this story. Much more to come so stay tuned.
Comment from MTF1955
Another great chapter. My I love that kid.
. I desperately wanted by (my) Little Man
This sentence reads funny.
In addition to everything else Beth was currently wrapped up tighter than a snare drum in she was pulling almost as many night time hours with
Thanks again for a great read. Mary
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2016
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Another great chapter. My I love that kid.
. I desperately wanted by (my) Little Man
This sentence reads funny.
In addition to everything else Beth was currently wrapped up tighter than a snare drum in she was pulling almost as many night time hours with
Thanks again for a great read. Mary
Comment Written 15-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2016
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of the first chapter. Stay tuned. Much more to come. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
There is no end to the anguish a parent feels when
a child is laying helpless and unconscious. You only sleep from exhaustion. Cody will come out of the coma when his little body heals to a point he can stand the pain.
Well done. Nancy
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2016
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There is no end to the anguish a parent feels when
a child is laying helpless and unconscious. You only sleep from exhaustion. Cody will come out of the coma when his little body heals to a point he can stand the pain.
Well done. Nancy
Comment Written 15-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2016
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of the first chapter. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
This chapter reveals the anguish that Sheriff Daniels. When you love someone, especially a child, it can take a toll on the health and state of mind. I don't like the thought that he will resign his Sheriff position. He is a good man and really good for the town of Astatula.
Brett, really like this story that you are developing. Well done my friend,,,,,,,,Jim
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2016
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This chapter reveals the anguish that Sheriff Daniels. When you love someone, especially a child, it can take a toll on the health and state of mind. I don't like the thought that he will resign his Sheriff position. He is a good man and really good for the town of Astatula.
Brett, really like this story that you are developing. Well done my friend,,,,,,,,Jim
Comment Written 15-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2016
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of the first chapter. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Sheriff Daniels continues his vigil beside Cody's bedside. He doesn't let anything deter him from his job of guardian. Once more, he muses about what he might have done to prevent the accident, and about the fallout of what the boys did.
Great story, and I await his recovery with bated breath!
Rhonda
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2016
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Sheriff Daniels continues his vigil beside Cody's bedside. He doesn't let anything deter him from his job of guardian. Once more, he muses about what he might have done to prevent the accident, and about the fallout of what the boys did.
Great story, and I await his recovery with bated breath!
Rhonda
Comment Written 15-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2016
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of the first chapter. Seems everyone is rooting for Cody to fully recover. Wouldn't it be tragic if he did not? Just a thought. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from Ricky1024
Hey Brett I was wondering if this is fiction or nonfiction book I live in New Jersey to Asbury Park Press about 6 weeks ago posted to front page court case where it's a four-year-old battle over bed on that was under a bed for 9 months it was loaded and shot of six year old that was in the house that was not related I was over $500,000 settlement Florida family which of course will not replace a 6 year old child I'm a firm believer on no weapons in the house unless you're locked up and kept on loaded and only if you're a hunter we don't need to protect yourselves with Firearms are other ways to do that of course so give me your thoughts on that and I could work here with this thanks Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2016
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Hey Brett I was wondering if this is fiction or nonfiction book I live in New Jersey to Asbury Park Press about 6 weeks ago posted to front page court case where it's a four-year-old battle over bed on that was under a bed for 9 months it was loaded and shot of six year old that was in the house that was not related I was over $500,000 settlement Florida family which of course will not replace a 6 year old child I'm a firm believer on no weapons in the house unless you're locked up and kept on loaded and only if you're a hunter we don't need to protect yourselves with Firearms are other ways to do that of course so give me your thoughts on that and I could work here with this thanks Ricky 1024
Comment Written 15-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2016
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This is all fiction. Glad you are enjoying my story. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from MizKat
Hi Brett,
This was another great addition to your story. I enjoyed every word of it and hope that Cody will wake up pretty soon too. He is a wonderful boy who cares about others and many of them care about him also.
Kat
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2016
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Hi Brett,
This was another great addition to your story. I enjoyed every word of it and hope that Cody will wake up pretty soon too. He is a wonderful boy who cares about others and many of them care about him also.
Kat
Comment Written 15-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2016
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of the first chapter. Wouldn't it be tragic if Cody did not come out of the coma? Just a thought. Your comments and support appreciated.
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Yes, it would be terrible if Cody couldn't wake up from his coma. Then who would you write about? Kat
Comment from barkingdog
I'm with Beth on this one. I'd worry about the Sheriff's health, too. He's wearing himself out sitting, watching, waiting for Little Man to wake up. But what's a dedicated man to do?
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2016
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I'm with Beth on this one. I'd worry about the Sheriff's health, too. He's wearing himself out sitting, watching, waiting for Little Man to wake up. But what's a dedicated man to do?
Comment Written 15-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2016
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Glad you are enjoying this portion of the first chapter. Wouldn't it be tragic if Cody did not wake up? Just a thought. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from misscookie
Once again you capture the heart within my heart.
You would think I knew the boy personally.
Any-who.
This saws a very emotional chapter.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2016
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Once again you capture the heart within my heart.
You would think I knew the boy personally.
Any-who.
This saws a very emotional chapter.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 15-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2016
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Glad you enjoyed this misscookie. So much more to come. You know your comments and support are appreciated.
