Comment from RPSaxena

Exceptional

Hello Ulla,
It's a marvelous piece of poetry in the form of 'Haiku' meeting all the required norms and transparently depicting its theme.
Wording is impressive, and enlivens this charming piece.
Best of Luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Jun-2016

Hi RP, awww, what a lovely review and of course the six stars. It does mean so much to me to be recognised like that. All the best. Ulla:)))

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

soft petals entwined 5
rustle gently in the breeze 7
insects abound4

good job with the syllable count 5/7/4
two lines connected-good job
kigo-late summer
satori-very clever--entwined petals and insects a bound

Hola guapa, como estas? You are a great haikuist! Besitos :) Buena suerte!

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Jun-2016

Muchisimas gracias . I'm so sorry in being this late. Un besito. Tu amiga, Ulla:)))

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very good haiku you have penned. The wording was very good and I love the imagery you used on this also. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Teri

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2016

Thank you so very much. I'm so pleased that you liked it. All the best. Ulla:))

Comment from Kaydoe

Excellent

The is a well written descriptive haiku poem. You bring forth a vivid picture with your words and the picture gives an entwined feeling reflecting the words. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2016

Thank you very much. I'm so pleased that you liked it.All the bestt. Ulla:))

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

I enjoyed the deeper meaning in your well constructed haiku. It seems that a lot of insects abound theses days. I also like the imagery of the soft petals entwined.

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2016

Hi Don, thank you so much for this great review. I'm glad you liked it. Much appreciated. All the best. Ulla:))

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This haiku, soft petals entwined, creates a scene in nature where the growing and the feeding occur and become the background of what is what life is all about.

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2016

Hi Bill, thanks so much for this great review. Much appreciated. All the best. Ulla:))

Comment from Susanjohn

Excellent

This is really quite nice and such a great picture!! I like the last line "insects abound" so true...enjoyed reading and good luck with the contest! :-)

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Jun-2016

Thanks ever so much and sorry to be so late in answering. All the best. Ulla:))

Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Excellent

A very well written haiku, my friend. Good sensory detail. Two interconnected lines with a strong satori. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2016

Hi Debbie, thanks a lot for the great review. Much appreciated. All the best. Ulla:)))

Comment from Kingsrookviii

Excellent

The truth is that I usually don't get a darn thing from Haiku poetry. But, this struck me as good or else I simply wouldn't respond by reviewing. But, this reminds me of trying to clear my mind while fishing and I stare in wonder at nature (flowers, wild ones, especially). Then, flies from the various hatches buzz me and I realize what a poor fly fisherman I am since I couldn't even identify the pest for what they specifically were. Weird, but that's what I got here, as a semi-memory from a fishing trip in the Colorado Rockies. This, somehow, took me back. I even had a brief visual recollection of an actual event. This describes it very well. Thanks. Bruce.

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2016

Awww, Bruce, this is an outstanding review. That my wee poem could stir such a lovely memory means a lot to me. Thank you so much for sharing this. It's one of the greatest compliments I've received in a very long time. All the best. Ulla:)))

Comment from C.J. 16

Excellent

This is a very good entry for the contest. I think you have followed all the Haiku rules, and I like the imagery and the satori. Very well done. Best of luck to you.

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Jun-2016

Thanks ever so much, and so sorry being so late in answering. All the best. Ulla:))