Whose Love is Superior?
free verse49 total reviews
Comment from DonandVicki
Hi Mike, your poem really resonated with me, you put a lot of emotion into this work. I listen to music as well when I write, it helps with writers bloc.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2016
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Hi Mike, your poem really resonated with me, you put a lot of emotion into this work. I listen to music as well when I write, it helps with writers bloc.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2016
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Writing with music is new to me. A suggestion from someone. I like it, totally different material comes out of it. :))
Hey, out little challenge group is today. We'd love to have you. Here's our little ad:
WAKE UP CHILDREN! IT'S POTLATCH TIME!
All are invited today in the Challenges forum at 6 PM Eastern Standard Time. That's New York Time or FanStory Time.
We're all writing minute poems and the topic is ... well, WE DON'T KNOW!
Phyllis will announce the topic at exactly 6 PM Eastern Standard Time and then
we'll all start writing and posting. First one finished wins the prize!
Prize? Yep, the adulation of the masses. Believe me, IT IS GOOD!
Remember, if you can't make it on time, anytime is fine. You can't be late and we
want EVERYONE to give it a try. We promise niceness to all who participate!
mikey
Comment from frogbook
A powerful and compelling read condemning the haters that are all too present these days. Effective in the changing colors and presentation. Well chosen words and descriptions.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2016
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A powerful and compelling read condemning the haters that are all too present these days. Effective in the changing colors and presentation. Well chosen words and descriptions.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2016
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So pleased you enjoyed. Great words that are highly appreciated. Was the four star intentional or in error. Just asking.
:)) mikey
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Oh my gosh-so sorry-I will correct that. Not sure how that happened except for my ongoing insanity. Mea Culpa!
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I'm a HUGE fan of ongoing insanity. LOL!!!!
No problem. :))
Comment from Gone but not forgotten
A sad commentary with an honest plea for love, not hate. Love is love and it doesn't matter who loves who. The same applies to my decisions about my body. My decisions. I don't know many (don't allow them in my life) who disagree with this but you've taken it a step further and asked people to look at themselves. Good for you! Thanks!
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2016
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A sad commentary with an honest plea for love, not hate. Love is love and it doesn't matter who loves who. The same applies to my decisions about my body. My decisions. I don't know many (don't allow them in my life) who disagree with this but you've taken it a step further and asked people to look at themselves. Good for you! Thanks!
Comment Written 16-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2016
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What a lovely and thoughtful review. I appreciate your insights. We have a little get together today in the Challenges Forum. We all write a poem and then review each other. I'll leave our "modest" little ad. We'd love to have you. mikey
WAKE UP CHILDREN! IT'S POTLATCH TIME!
All are invited today in the Challenges forum at 6 PM Eastern Standard Time. That's New York Time or FanStory Time.
We're all writing minute poems and the topic is ... well, WE DON'T KNOW!
Phyllis will announce the topic at exactly 6 PM Eastern Standard Time and then
we'll all start writing and posting. First one finished wins the prize!
Prize? Yep, the adulation of the masses. Believe me, IT IS GOOD!
Remember, if you can't make it on time, anytime is fine. You can't be late and we
want EVERYONE to give it a try. We promise niceness to all who participate!
Comment from Lisa Deverick
Your words convey an important message that violence , and hatred are not the answer.When fellow Americans are gunned down because of someone's self proclaimed judgement- it is horrific, and we should all mourn the lives lost. Love is commanded of us all... it is the greatest gift we can give to others. I believe that we are all accountable for our own actions and that at the end of our life, God Himself will judge us. So it simply is not our burden to have to judge others...we need to work on being the best human being that we can and show love to everyone we meet.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2016
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Your words convey an important message that violence , and hatred are not the answer.When fellow Americans are gunned down because of someone's self proclaimed judgement- it is horrific, and we should all mourn the lives lost. Love is commanded of us all... it is the greatest gift we can give to others. I believe that we are all accountable for our own actions and that at the end of our life, God Himself will judge us. So it simply is not our burden to have to judge others...we need to work on being the best human being that we can and show love to everyone we meet.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2016
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Hi, Lisa
We are one hundred percent in agreement and I love the concise and intelligent way you conveyed the message. So very well done. Thanks so much. We have little get togethers on the weekend for poetry and prose. Today is poetry and we'd love to have you if you're interested. :)) Here's our little ad.
WAKE UP CHILDREN! IT'S POTLATCH TIME!
All are invited today in the Challenges forum at 6 PM Eastern Standard Time. That's New York Time or FanStory Time.
We're all writing minute poems and the topic is ... well, WE DON'T KNOW!
Phyllis will announce the topic at exactly 6 PM Eastern Standard Time and then
we'll all start writing and posting. First one finished wins the prize!
Prize? Yep, the adulation of the masses. Believe me, IT IS GOOD!
Remember, if you can't make it on time, anytime is fine. You can't be late and we
want EVERYONE to give it a try. We promise niceness to all who participate!
mikey
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It is 10:06pm eastern time and I just got home... I so wish I had seen your invite earlier... although I still would not have been able to attend.PLEASE do remember me next time! It sounds pretty awesome, and I like awesome :)
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Hi, Lisa
You can pop by anytime. Most of the entries are late Saturday or Sunday or even Monday. So if you have some time. Feel free. We like awesome too, like YOU!! :)) mikey
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aww shucks! (said with head down and foot shuffling the dirt) Thanks friend- I will try
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soooo....what is the topic??
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Fathers. Burnt the midnight oil. LOL
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oh...thats a tough one.. I don't have a happy story regarding my sperm donor.. no puppies or rainbows
id hate to spoil a happy fathers day...lol
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Several are not ribbons and bows.
I never met my father. Lots of variety. You'll come up with something. :))
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okay- I have something- how do I send it to the forum? (new to me)
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I fail to understand that just because we disagree with people why we can't still be TOLERANT of their beliefs. It makes no sense to me, but your wonderful poem does make sense. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2016
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I fail to understand that just because we disagree with people why we can't still be TOLERANT of their beliefs. It makes no sense to me, but your wonderful poem does make sense. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2016
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We're totally on the same page, Barbara. It's so senseless. So pleased you enjoyed this. We have a little get together today if you happen to be around. Here's a little ad for it. We'd LOVE to have you.
WAKE UP CHILDREN! IT'S POTLATCH TIME!
All are invited today in the Challenges forum at 6 PM Eastern Standard Time. That's New York Time or FanStory Time.
We're all writing minute poems and the topic is ... well, WE DON'T KNOW!
Phyllis will announce the topic at exactly 6 PM Eastern Standard Time and then
we'll all start writing and posting. First one finished wins the prize!
Prize? Yep, the adulation of the masses. Believe me, IT IS GOOD!
Remember, if you can't make it on time, anytime is fine. You can't be late and we
want EVERYONE to give it a try. We promise niceness to all who participate!
mikey
Comment from Sandisan
Very thought provoking, well written. I've always thought folks should just let other people just be. Why do we have to judge everybody? I agree with you, what has happened in Orlando is a tragedy.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2016
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Very thought provoking, well written. I've always thought folks should just let other people just be. Why do we have to judge everybody? I agree with you, what has happened in Orlando is a tragedy.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2016
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We're totally on the same page. Thanks so much for reading and your thoughtful comments. mikey
Comment from c_lucas
We are created in the image or God, but we do not have the rights to judge. That is his job. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2016
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We are created in the image or God, but we do not have the rights to judge. That is his job. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2016
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Couldn't agree more, Charlie. Thanks so much as always for a thoughtful response. mikey
Comment from victor 66
I'm not religious and am probably an agnostic. My feeling about people that feel the need for church, etc., is that it's probably a good thing if it brings them comfort and it doesn't hurt anyone. Then, I wish them well. Your poem covers so many facets, I'm not sure I know where to begin. Specifically concerning Orlando; why is it when gentle, harmless people seek refuge in one of the few places where they can be accepted, they are terrorized and murdered? I think using religion and bigotry is just an excuse for being so threaten by insecurity that you can't control your rage. Then, there's just plain crazy. I do appreciate your thoughts and your take on, quite literally, the world and where it's at.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2016
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I'm not religious and am probably an agnostic. My feeling about people that feel the need for church, etc., is that it's probably a good thing if it brings them comfort and it doesn't hurt anyone. Then, I wish them well. Your poem covers so many facets, I'm not sure I know where to begin. Specifically concerning Orlando; why is it when gentle, harmless people seek refuge in one of the few places where they can be accepted, they are terrorized and murdered? I think using religion and bigotry is just an excuse for being so threaten by insecurity that you can't control your rage. Then, there's just plain crazy. I do appreciate your thoughts and your take on, quite literally, the world and where it's at.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2016
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Religion can be a good thing or it can be a horrible destructive thing. It depends. If it's about love and tolerance, then great. That works with or without religion. Anything else, doesn't work. I think we're on the same page. :))
Appreciate the insights and thoughts. Jeesh. Awful things happening. So sad. Thanks so much, mikey
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You are most welcome, Mikey. I've been reading your work for several years now and have never been disappointed.
Comment from RGstar
Yes, I agree with the heart behind this for we are free to be whom we shall, yet there are instances that raises eyebrows where children are concerned and the choices which they have ...to choose, in fact, no choice, so who has there voices? There will always be grey areas, and where do we stop?
Normal is what we make it, as a whole. what is normal for one society may not be for another...Yet we all have a fundamental right for freedom and choice, choosing whatever partners we would...and so should it be...I just need to hear a voice for the child that is not able to choose, for we have heard much for the adult who can.
Good write, Author, for the heart is at the fore. Long live the right to choose.
My best wishes,
RG
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2016
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Yes, I agree with the heart behind this for we are free to be whom we shall, yet there are instances that raises eyebrows where children are concerned and the choices which they have ...to choose, in fact, no choice, so who has there voices? There will always be grey areas, and where do we stop?
Normal is what we make it, as a whole. what is normal for one society may not be for another...Yet we all have a fundamental right for freedom and choice, choosing whatever partners we would...and so should it be...I just need to hear a voice for the child that is not able to choose, for we have heard much for the adult who can.
Good write, Author, for the heart is at the fore. Long live the right to choose.
My best wishes,
RG
Comment Written 15-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2016
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Thanks so much, RG
As always an in depth and thoughtful take on everything.
I so agree, the right to choose is just everything. Regards, mikey
Comment from Ulla
Mikey, you are angry, you are sorry and you are exasperated. You just can't understand what is happening to people who have never done anything other than being them. What can happen to any of us just because we don't think and feel and live like they think we should do. How dare they and all in the name of a so called belief. Oh how I feel the same as you. It brings tears to my eyes. What is happening to this world? I loved your passionate poem. All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2016
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Mikey, you are angry, you are sorry and you are exasperated. You just can't understand what is happening to people who have never done anything other than being them. What can happen to any of us just because we don't think and feel and live like they think we should do. How dare they and all in the name of a so called belief. Oh how I feel the same as you. It brings tears to my eyes. What is happening to this world? I loved your passionate poem. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 15-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2016
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Hi, Ulla.
You certainly have everything I tried to say exactly right. We are on the same page for sure. We can only hope the world sees it our way. Thanks so much, mikey
