Comment from C.J. 16

Excellent

This is a great entry for this particular contest. Your choice of words and use of imagery are excellent. Best of luck to you in the contest.

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016

I am delighted with these encouraging words zanya

Comment from harmony13

Excellent

Excellent Poem! The first two lines of this poem flow and connect
well. The last line put the poem all together. The artwork is perfect
and compliments the words and theme of this poem.

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016

Delighted with these encouraging words !zanya

Comment from Lisa Deverick

Excellent

Your 5-7-5 has wonderful wordage and a great picture- I think this would make a cool poster. Plus, it is so freaking ht out today in NC I like seeing the snow and ice...well done

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016

Great reply and I love that expression 'wordage' zanya

Comment from sage17611

Excellent

I really like your 5-7-5 poem for the winter Ode. I like your description of the setting sun on the frozen land, the picture is beautiful, and compliments the poem. Good use of syllables for this writing prompt, good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016

Thanks for a superb review zanya

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Impressive image.
-Very good format.
-Well written poem.
-Connection is good between lines one and two.
-Very good imagery in both.
-Very nice conclusion.
-Good luck in the contest; you have a good entry.

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016

Thanks for a great review zanya

reply by Pam (respa) on 26-Jun-2016

You are welcome.

Comment from Slythytove2

Excellent

First- good luck with your contest.
Second- a nice presentation with a great sunset scene.
Third- Lovely words for description.

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016

Thanks for reviewing zanya

Comment from Liberty Justice

Excellent

"Frozen landscape," is such a lovely landscape. Five stars It seems so serene and quiet. Nature's peace of mind shone here with touch of sunlight rays. Well done. View mine also and good luck contest today. liberty justice

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016

Thanks for such an encouraging review zanya

Comment from Ginger Banks

Excellent

Wonderful, fabulous, exactly captures an excellent moment in winter! One of my favorite parts of winter is standing beneath a street lamp and watching the snowflakes float feathery-like to the ground. The other is laying under the Christmas tree watching the lights and smelling the pine, Lol. Thank you for sharing this picture, it's gorgeous, and for the poem.

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016

And thank you for sharing those images ! zanya

reply by Ginger Banks on 26-Jun-2016

You're welcome.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This ode to winter, Pallid Sunlight Rays, finds a source of spiritual renewal in the midst of the dormant and stifling winter season. Nice.

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016

Thanks for reading and reviewing zanya

Comment from fionageorge

Excellent

This is a lovely ode to winter, It made me fell cold just reading this! Your words conjured up the feel of a cold icy water regaled by th winter's sun.
Good luck in the contest and warmest regards, Marijke :o)

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016

Great review -loved it ! zanya