Comment from RodG

Excellent

An interesting approach to this prompt. I am fortunate not to have allergies or asthma, so I had not thought how winter would be WELCOME to those with these conditions. Blizzards on the other hand???

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.

Comment from jusylee72

Excellent

must be an allergy person. Winter is good for that. I find these short poems hard to critique. I do think you did a good job of explaining why you like winter. Judy

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 Comment Written 13-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.

Comment from cumulus365

Excellent

remove the period in the title
line 2: lowercase "No"
line 3: lowercase "Blizzard"
yours meet the syllables count and message is clear that breathing in winter time is is good your you.

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 Comment Written 13-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week. Thanks for the tips.

reply by cumulus365 on 14-Jun-2016

You are welcome. Best.