To Last Forever
Viewing comments for Chapter 30 "Drawing on Walls"Poems by Michael
18 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
Michael, This is a very well written poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Hugs, Teri
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Michael, This is a very well written poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Hugs, Teri
Comment Written 13-Nov-2016
Comment from tfawcus
As is so often the case with your poetry you have managed to suggest more meaning than the mere words themselves can hold. Somehow you have captured not just the essece of shifting iridiscence but mankind's endless fascination with softly shifting light. I was captivated by this one.
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As is so often the case with your poetry you have managed to suggest more meaning than the mere words themselves can hold. Somehow you have captured not just the essece of shifting iridiscence but mankind's endless fascination with softly shifting light. I was captivated by this one.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2016
Comment from djsaxon
Gorgeous, mister. favorite triplet...
something almost explained innate
listening to conch shells tell tall tales
torturing next stone unturned
hugs - DJ
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Gorgeous, mister. favorite triplet...
something almost explained innate
listening to conch shells tell tall tales
torturing next stone unturned
hugs - DJ
Comment Written 12-Nov-2016
Comment from RGstar
I like the hard marbled surface to this, my friend. There is a certain substance, almost granite -like to its surface but searching in its depth.
Bravo.
One thing I think essential to change, though small;
''infinite answers in a blinks glimpse''
''blink's'' if associated with rather than a flower.
Gives it a more profound meaning.
Always a pleasure to read your work, my brother. I've got a five for you.
My best wishes,
RG
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2016
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I like the hard marbled surface to this, my friend. There is a certain substance, almost granite -like to its surface but searching in its depth.
Bravo.
One thing I think essential to change, though small;
''infinite answers in a blinks glimpse''
''blink's'' if associated with rather than a flower.
Gives it a more profound meaning.
Always a pleasure to read your work, my brother. I've got a five for you.
My best wishes,
RG
Comment Written 27-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2016
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Hey Bro...-smile-
ah thank you...I'll fix it.
I looked up Mother of pearl...it sounded special...and I took what learned and related so "all" could understand......lol...ah ha...well...it does make sense...if you've got a lil' while. ..haha...thank you my Friend. Hope you're okay....always love Michael
Comment from DonandVicki
Written like fine lyrics, I can almost hear a melody. As always your poetry opens my imagination and inspires me. Very well done
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2016
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Written like fine lyrics, I can almost hear a melody. As always your poetry opens my imagination and inspires me. Very well done
Comment Written 27-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2016
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Hi...-smile-
and thank you...I'm happy to hear that...thank you. love Michael
Comment from DR DIP
really nice words and greAT ACCOMPANYING SONG RECONCILED YOU HAVE A WONDERFUL WAY WITH WORDS sorry about the upperfont it changed accidentally mid write lol
dip
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2016
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really nice words and greAT ACCOMPANYING SONG RECONCILED YOU HAVE A WONDERFUL WAY WITH WORDS sorry about the upperfont it changed accidentally mid write lol
dip
Comment Written 26-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2016
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Hey Doc...-smile-
ha...well thanks...I do love em'...appreciate you man. love Michael
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for the collection of pictures, and I picked up a new word--"nacreous"--but it isn't in my dictionary. I liked your appealing to our senses with the reference to the very visual "mother of pearl" and the sound from the "conch shell". Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2016
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Thank you for the collection of pictures, and I picked up a new word--"nacreous"--but it isn't in my dictionary. I liked your appealing to our senses with the reference to the very visual "mother of pearl" and the sound from the "conch shell". Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 25-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2016
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narcreous...or nacre...is mother of pearl...known as...-smile-...its an organic-inorganic...it makes up the outer coating of pearls. strong, resilient...and iridescent. hard to make out exact.
I wrote this of course listening to the song. thinking about a meeting to come...-smile-...I didn't know all that until...i looked up mother of pearl. thank you J...just got home. love to you...Michael
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Thank you so much for the teaching me about the word and more about mother of pearl. I relish lifelong learning--another bonus from FanStory. Have a restful evening and end of the week- Joan
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well its an even trade...you taught me grace...just by watching you...okay...at least I recognize it now....-smile-
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You are such a sweetheart! May your dreams be as sweet--night, night- Joan
Comment from c_lucas
This post is a bit beyond me. I read it twice, but could not come up with your meaning. I will have to think on it. The Mother of pearl makes me think of "The pearl of great thought."
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This post is a bit beyond me. I read it twice, but could not come up with your meaning. I will have to think on it. The Mother of pearl makes me think of "The pearl of great thought."
Comment Written 25-Aug-2016
Comment from Heidi M
Loved the way you came full circle on this poem, ending where you began. I read it twice to grasp all that you have contained in it and probably need to read it again to see what other gems I may have missed. You have excellent word choices.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2016
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Loved the way you came full circle on this poem, ending where you began. I read it twice to grasp all that you have contained in it and probably need to read it again to see what other gems I may have missed. You have excellent word choices.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2016
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Hi Heidi...-smile-
I've loved you since you were a lil' girl in that movie.
even more so after this review...excuse me...I'm I'm emotional right now....love Michael
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"Grandfather! Grandfather!" This was my older sister's favorite book so yep, that's how I got my name! LOL
Comment from country ranch writer
wonders of the world happening right before your eyes can be captivating great picture and presentation yo have for this poem good luck
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2016
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wonders of the world happening right before your eyes can be captivating great picture and presentation yo have for this poem good luck
Comment Written 25-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2016
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Hello God's Country...-smile-
yes maam...take for instance today...shwww wow...right...?
anyway I got a run back to work...I have a dream to one day become a gazillionaire thats why I quit sleeping....-smile-...love Michael
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