On Higher Grounds
Sonnet-A search for living on a higher ground68 total reviews
Comment from Dancemom
This is a well-written sonnet on treating others well and doing good instead of bad. Your meter and rhyming pattern are well delivered.
Great job! Thank you for sharing and have a wonderful day.
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This is a well-written sonnet on treating others well and doing good instead of bad. Your meter and rhyming pattern are well delivered.
Great job! Thank you for sharing and have a wonderful day.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2020
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
As always your heartfelt and uplifting words resonate and I must tell you how pleasant it is to read your well-composed words. Your talent is inspirational, to me and I am sure to others.
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As always your heartfelt and uplifting words resonate and I must tell you how pleasant it is to read your well-composed words. Your talent is inspirational, to me and I am sure to others.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2020
Comment from Drew Delaney
Your poem with excellent rhythm and rhyme is a joy to read.
'Til we know the power of spoken word,
to harm, to charm, to lift, let goodness show;
These words remind the reader the power of the spoken word.
Thank you for sharing.
Drew
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Your poem with excellent rhythm and rhyme is a joy to read.
'Til we know the power of spoken word,
to harm, to charm, to lift, let goodness show;
These words remind the reader the power of the spoken word.
Thank you for sharing.
Drew
Comment Written 11-Feb-2020
Comment from amada
I love your words, dear poet. This poem comes very much at a time when I needed a word of calmness in the tempest. What you say in here touches my heart. Congratulations in your long life ...1925, I was born in 1936...I guess poetry is a reason for a long life.
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I love your words, dear poet. This poem comes very much at a time when I needed a word of calmness in the tempest. What you say in here touches my heart. Congratulations in your long life ...1925, I was born in 1936...I guess poetry is a reason for a long life.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2020
Comment from Ulla
Hi Jay, this is another beautifully written sonnet and with a very strong message lying within. You are so very good at writing these. I liked it very much. It made me think and that is a good thing. Warm regards. Ulla:))
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Hi Jay, this is another beautifully written sonnet and with a very strong message lying within. You are so very good at writing these. I liked it very much. It made me think and that is a good thing. Warm regards. Ulla:))
Comment Written 11-Feb-2020
Comment from rspoet
Hello Jake,
You've written an excellent poem in the sonnet form
with very good rhymes and an excellent reflective couplet.
A very good message of the power of words to lift if used
for that purpose.
Well done
Robert
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Hello Jake,
You've written an excellent poem in the sonnet form
with very good rhymes and an excellent reflective couplet.
A very good message of the power of words to lift if used
for that purpose.
Well done
Robert
Comment Written 11-Feb-2020
Comment from papa55mike
The higher ground should always be our passion in life. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
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The higher ground should always be our passion in life. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 11-Feb-2020
Comment from Frank Jauregui
Great poem, echoes so many of the words and teachings in God's Holy scriptures Proverbs 18:21 comes to mind "death and life are in the power of the tongue". Well written and well done. Be blessed
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Great poem, echoes so many of the words and teachings in God's Holy scriptures Proverbs 18:21 comes to mind "death and life are in the power of the tongue". Well written and well done. Be blessed
Comment Written 11-Feb-2020
Comment from Frederick Samson
A great poem. Each syllable each used to its maximum. The rhyming is great aswell. I particularly appreciated the message that was being put forward to the reader. Thank you for sharing this write.
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A great poem. Each syllable each used to its maximum. The rhyming is great aswell. I particularly appreciated the message that was being put forward to the reader. Thank you for sharing this write.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2020
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Such a beautiful definition for a life and faith well lived, Jaybird -- our words affect others so much more profoundly that many realize... :) :) Thanx for sharing, sir! ;)
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Such a beautiful definition for a life and faith well lived, Jaybird -- our words affect others so much more profoundly that many realize... :) :) Thanx for sharing, sir! ;)
Comment Written 11-Feb-2020
