Poems
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Comment from Pollyana83
This is quite a powerful piece. So often we can hold back for various reasons and sometimes even think that we are doing the best for others by not speaking.
Sometimes may be think that we are not allowed to speak or that what we have to say is invalid. Sometimes we have learnt not to speak.
Silence is a powerful tool and can also be manipulative.
Very thought provoking.
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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2016
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This is quite a powerful piece. So often we can hold back for various reasons and sometimes even think that we are doing the best for others by not speaking.
Sometimes may be think that we are not allowed to speak or that what we have to say is invalid. Sometimes we have learnt not to speak.
Silence is a powerful tool and can also be manipulative.
Very thought provoking.
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Comment Written 07-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2016
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Thank you, Pollyana, for the thoughtful and positive review. Bill
Comment from P1
wow this is really good
your message is powerfully
written and comes across well
because of the style and words
you have chosen. good luck with this
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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2016
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wow this is really good
your message is powerfully
written and comes across well
because of the style and words
you have chosen. good luck with this
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Comment Written 07-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2016
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Thank you, Paige, for the excellent review. Bill
