Over The Hill
Sadly, I have lost my muse again68 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
Hi Jaybird, I think he is on vacation with my muse...
it just up and left...LOL...But I must say...I think yours is checking in...because this is a great poem...great rhythm and rhyme...and a great story told...love your poem...very well written...love Linda xxoo
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Hi Jaybird, I think he is on vacation with my muse...
it just up and left...LOL...But I must say...I think yours is checking in...because this is a great poem...great rhythm and rhyme...and a great story told...love your poem...very well written...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 13-Feb-2019
Comment from royowen
As I've advised others, there's always something to write about, as you've revealed, a missing muse is a good subject. There's always politics, whatever god one is fond of, or write about...nothing, the universe is full of it. Beautfully written in articulte 7777 quatrains and abcb rhyming, well done blessings, Roy
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As I've advised others, there's always something to write about, as you've revealed, a missing muse is a good subject. There's always politics, whatever god one is fond of, or write about...nothing, the universe is full of it. Beautfully written in articulte 7777 quatrains and abcb rhyming, well done blessings, Roy
Comment Written 13-Feb-2019
Comment from estory
The iambic pentameter and the rhyme scheme create an interwoven, brightly ringing music in this traditional quatrain poem. You have a simple image of climbing that poetic hill, with your aspirations, and then rolling down the other side, maybe not quite sure you achieved all your aims. Much like life. estory
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The iambic pentameter and the rhyme scheme create an interwoven, brightly ringing music in this traditional quatrain poem. You have a simple image of climbing that poetic hill, with your aspirations, and then rolling down the other side, maybe not quite sure you achieved all your aims. Much like life. estory
Comment Written 13-Feb-2019
Comment from Helena Frances
This is such a fun read---fun because I totally identify with the loss of those brilliant phrases I didn't need to write down because my memory would not fail me.
Humility is good for the soul-my soul is very healthy:)
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This is such a fun read---fun because I totally identify with the loss of those brilliant phrases I didn't need to write down because my memory would not fail me.
Humility is good for the soul-my soul is very healthy:)
Comment Written 13-Feb-2019
Comment from Gail Denham
Love it. I've been there when my muse wandered out the window or crawled down the sink drain hole. For days it will allude me -- and then one day it appears, quietly sneaking into my consciousness like cats sneaking up on a careless bird. Snag it - hold it tight - good luck in your hunt.
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Love it. I've been there when my muse wandered out the window or crawled down the sink drain hole. For days it will allude me -- and then one day it appears, quietly sneaking into my consciousness like cats sneaking up on a careless bird. Snag it - hold it tight - good luck in your hunt.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2019
Comment from persevere
I love this poem. I can relate to all these sentiments as my muse went awol a short while ago. My muse then popped down from the hill to tempt me in the middle of the night, but floated away before I had time to put pen to paper. He/ she has now become more of a presence so I hope I am not all washed up yet!
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I love this poem. I can relate to all these sentiments as my muse went awol a short while ago. My muse then popped down from the hill to tempt me in the middle of the night, but floated away before I had time to put pen to paper. He/ she has now become more of a presence so I hope I am not all washed up yet!
Comment Written 13-Feb-2019
Comment from victor 66
Well, JayBird, I'd like to know the person where the words will not stop. However, this poem does not give me the impression that your muse has abandoned you. At best, she's just playing hide n seek. I liked your poem a lot. Happy Valentine's Day.
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Well, JayBird, I'd like to know the person where the words will not stop. However, this poem does not give me the impression that your muse has abandoned you. At best, she's just playing hide n seek. I liked your poem a lot. Happy Valentine's Day.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2019
Comment from Stephanie Launiu
This is a well-written poem. I definitely don't think your muse has left you. Your writing is too good. Maybe your muse is just on a short break. Love your rhyming! Thanks for sharing.
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This is a well-written poem. I definitely don't think your muse has left you. Your writing is too good. Maybe your muse is just on a short break. Love your rhyming! Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2019
Comment from swelling
I love this! Great humour and cleverly crafted. Your muse surely hasn't left you.
The entire piece flowed seamlessly and made me laugh out loud.
Great work - keep them coming!
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I love this! Great humour and cleverly crafted. Your muse surely hasn't left you.
The entire piece flowed seamlessly and made me laugh out loud.
Great work - keep them coming!
Comment Written 13-Feb-2019
Comment from LynSys
I'm sure she's still around...maybe just hiding ;o)
Great flow and rhythm and telling of a simple story.
The "Recognized" and "All Time Best" awards are well deserved!
Lynda
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I'm sure she's still around...maybe just hiding ;o)
Great flow and rhythm and telling of a simple story.
The "Recognized" and "All Time Best" awards are well deserved!
Lynda
Comment Written 12-Feb-2019
