Comment from Lisa Deverick

Excellent

This is such a beautiful tribute to your niece and her new husband. I hope you will print your poem with their picture on it and frame it for them.

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2016

Hi Lisa, My thanks to you for your kind words for my tribute to my neice and new husband and yes i will frame a copy for them Cheers Christine

Comment from tony bronk

Excellent

Your using the word "captured" was very wise and clever. It was like the third line of a haiku. And the third line of a haiku makes it or breaks the haiku. Good poem. Tony Bronk

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2016

Hi Tony ,Thanks so much for this review and I am glad the word captured worked . Many Cheers to you Christine😃

Comment from misscookie

Exceptional

What a lovely and happy couple
May those feeling and emotions for each other last for ever
You choose the correct words to go with the photo
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2016

Hi Cookie Thank you so much for your lovely review and generous six stars for my poem. I am so pleased for your great support and send you a big hug xx Yes they are a delightfully happy couple and this image reflected their love beautifully. I couldn't go past it for this contest . My Cheers are sent to you xx Christine😀😄

Comment from Henry Carlyle

Excellent

Love poems are my favourite, and I thought you expressed a lovely sentiment in the space you had (which I think is quite hard to do). Best of luck in the contest :)

HC

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2016

Hi HC. Nice to meet you and thanks so much for your review and best wishes for this contest. I toyed with the words for quite a while and this is what came to mind I hope it does justice to their photo. Many Cheers Christine😄

Comment from Susanne M. Psyris

Excellent

A lovely entry into the 2-4-2 contest. The picture is beautiful! Nice job. Good luck in the contest. God bless and hugs, Susanne

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2016

Hi Susanne. Thank you for reading and reviewing my 2-4-2 poem . I loved this photo and wanted to do justice to it and appreciate your lovely comments and good luck wishes . hugs back Cheers Christine😀

Comment from ciliverde

Excellent

Awwww...how sweet! Isn't love grand? It's so wonderful to see people happy and that much in love. Well done! The truth of their love is held there, in their eyes, for all to see :)
Carol

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016

Hi Carol. it was The bride was so happy so was he and it was lovely to see two people genuinely in love and it was a great wedding and I love this image Said it all Thanks for your review Cheers for a lovely day Christine😄

Comment from Brett Matthew West

Excellent

To be young and in love. Nothing like it in the world.

And, to know that, as this well written poem depicts, it is obviously seen in the eyes of the beholder.

Should be a good contest entry.

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016

Hi Brett, Many thanks for you review and encouraging words. Yes it is in the eyes and they shone all day. I felt this needed to be seen it was a very happy occasion. Many Cheers to you Christine😃

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Wedding photos -- how beautiful! And what a great shot. I love that look in her eyes, like, 'I got him!' hahahahahaha !! But Chrissy - you know me, I always have to offer my two cents. The whole scene/presentation matters to me and I think that the capitalization is off and you need a hyphen. Here, like this:

True Love
held in their eyes --
captured

Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016

Hi Robyn, Thanks for your review and suggestion I wasn't sure about the capitilization for this so I will accept your advice and change it Cheers for your read and support. I was a lovely wedding and the bride smiled with love in her eyes all day. They will make a great couple. Cheers Christine😀

reply by robyn corum on 06-Jun-2016

Chrissy, please don't just go by me - see what other people say. But with that said, hahahahahaha, I woke up in the middle of the night last night -- I kid you not! and thought, no no! I should have said:

True Love
held in their eyes
-- captured --

So, see? I'm a crazy person!

reply by the author on 06-Jun-2016

Hi Robyn, Goodness me I woke you up now that is bad LOL. No I liked it the way you suggested and have had some lovely reviews. But do appreciate your help any time now go back to sleeeeeep Cheers Christine😔

Comment from foxangie123

Excellent

A great two four two that says love in so few words. You did a very nice job with this as it is beautiful and so very true. Pretty picture as well. More please:)))

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016

Hi Angie, Thanks so much my friend for your review and lovely comments and yes it is a beautiful photo of true love. The wedding was full of love and happiness for them we are all so pleased. Cheers Christine😃

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

These ultra short forms must be terribly difficult to write. Every word has to count. Anyway you seem to have got it right here. They are hard to review too because either the syllable counts are correct or they aren't - these are. There really isn't any more to be said

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016

Hi Pantygynt. I am pleased it met all requirements and appreciate you review very much .Thanks you have a great day. It is difficult to just get it right with so few words I hope I have done them justice.Cheers Christine😃