Comment from AnnaLinda

Excellent

Teri,

You have a very excellent Quinzaine poem/entry here.
I looked at the requirements for the contest and it
appears you have it right:)

I like how you present your faith
and make a strong statement while doing it.
Your presentation is also lovely.

Linda

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016

Thank you my friend. hugs, Teri

reply by AnnaLinda on 05-Jun-2016

I see you changed the last line...I must not have been awake when I reviewed this...lol Sorry I did not catch that you needed that 2nd question. I did look at the contest requirements too?

I liked your last statement so much...
Oh well, good luck.

Linda

Comment from William Ross

Good

This is nice but does not fit a quinzaine, this should have 2 questions after the first line yes I am on the last line is not a question, If changes are made to fit the prompt and style I can review again.

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 Comment Written 05-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016

Thank you my friend. I did fix that. have a blessed day. Teri

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

Teri, the greatest blessing we can have is to know Jesus as our Savior and know we shall see Him in Heaven. I will be seeing you there too, Teri. Blessings for a great Lord's day. Patricia

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 Comment Written 05-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016

Thank you my friend. Wont that be a great time! hugs, Teri