Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

Lovely artwork Teri and a very thoughtful Quinzaine Poem with the age old questions - Am I happy now? Am I free?
Good luck in the contest,
cheers.

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2016

Thank you my friend. Teri

Comment from Sankey

Excellent

Wishing you all the best. This was a wonderful short poem. Always good to read of a bro or sis's testimony. So glad to have so many of like precious faith in this place.

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2016

Thank you my friend. Teri

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Exceptional

Hi, Teri

= I like this a lot. Great ??? in your poem.
= I have to agree ... you are free in His love.
= Love entry. Good luck in the contest, my friend.

(*<*) A Smile Is A Frown Turned Upside-Down (*>*)
Cheers & Blessings ... Jacqueline ~ Jackie ~ Jax

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2016

Thank you my friend. Teri

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

Yes, once we accept Jesus Christ as our own personal savior it lifts the weight off our shoulders. Now, we just have to bring ourselves out from among the way of the world, and strive to be a new creature. Great job. :-)

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2016

Thank you Ric. Teri

Comment from damommy

Excellent

Of course, you're happy now. Who wouldn't be happy with Jesus!!! I know it's just a poem, and you are a very happy person in your faith. Where would some of us be if God hadn't carried us through?

Very nicely said. Has a lot of impact. 8-)

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016

Thank so very true my friend. hugs, Teri

Comment from foxangie123

Excellent

Very nicely done. The picture is amazing as well. I might change the questions to statements for reassurance to other readers not saved or maybe these kinds of poetry you wrote for needs to be questions. I'm not familiar with it. It's still awesome as always.

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016

Thank you for the great review. Its a requirement to ask questions in second and third line. Hugs, Teri

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I tell you this, anyone who meets Jesus is happy, how could they be anything else? The truth in glory revealed, hope personified in Him, it is true. Well done Teri, I think it is an excellent question, and a good entry, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016

Thank you Roy. Teri

reply by royowen on 05-Jun-2016

Most welcome

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

A personal relationship with Jesus is the only way to go for some people. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016

Thank you Charlie. Teri

Comment from heyjude

Excellent

Teri, your syllable count is right and of course I like the message.
There is however something you need to fix on that last line. It
must also be a question. You need to fix that. I do like the
message though.

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016

Thank you my friend. I think I fixed it. hugs, Teri

reply by heyjude on 05-Jun-2016

Yes, that looks good. Judy

Comment from Galactia

Excellent

Hi
Great little poem reflecting your faith in jesys, perfect syllable count across all lines, why i have given you 4 stars is because your last line is meant to be a question, relating to your first line.
I have given you five stars as i am doing my surgery tomorrow and i am leaving it, in good faith that you will fix it.

Good luck in the contest
Regards
Tia

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016

Thank you Tia. I did go back and fix that. hugs and prayers for you. Teri