Astatula (Final Edition)
Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "Calling Card"A young boy tries to turn his life around.Can he?
6 total reviews
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
I read the other first now I understand . Should have read this one first.
I love the way you wrote it and now understand the dismissal of the deputy.
Very well written
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2016
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I read the other first now I understand . Should have read this one first.
I love the way you wrote it and now understand the dismissal of the deputy.
Very well written
Comment Written 02-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2016
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Glad you enjoyed this story and are staying with it. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from MizKat
Hi Brett,
This is another nice chapter. Someone is really trying to make it sound like Cody's a thief. I'm glad Mr. Lacroix was there and he explained to the sheriff that Cody had been working with him for an hour or more.
Kat
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2016
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Hi Brett,
This is another nice chapter. Someone is really trying to make it sound like Cody's a thief. I'm glad Mr. Lacroix was there and he explained to the sheriff that Cody had been working with him for an hour or more.
Kat
Comment Written 02-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2016
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of the story. Much more to come. So stay tuned. Your comments and support appreciated.
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Thanks Brett. I just finished reading the other one. Kat
Comment from misscookie
Someone doesn't like the sheriff and to get back at him he must have said Cody was shoplifting.And He has to be the one to mess up his car?
There I go guessing wrong again... I just have to hold my horse and see what happens next.
Cookie
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2016
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Someone doesn't like the sheriff and to get back at him he must have said Cody was shoplifting.And He has to be the one to mess up his car?
There I go guessing wrong again... I just have to hold my horse and see what happens next.
Cookie
Comment Written 02-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2016
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Your horse is spot on misscookie. Glad you are enjoying this story still. Your comments and support appreciated.
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Until next time.
Cookie
Comment from Sankey
Great chapter, and I know who put the cow dung and smash the window in the car. Thanks for another good read. Maybe Cody can get some more part time work? I like your style. Keep it up. No spags!
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2016
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Great chapter, and I know who put the cow dung and smash the window in the car. Thanks for another good read. Maybe Cody can get some more part time work? I like your style. Keep it up. No spags!
Comment Written 02-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2016
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Glad you are enjoying this story. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Cody is working to help the store owner, and is rewarded with a necklace for Beth.
Meanwhile, he's falsely accused of shoplifting.
The Sheriff is directed to the truth, and Cody's reputation is repaired.
Good story,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2016
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Cody is working to help the store owner, and is rewarded with a necklace for Beth.
Meanwhile, he's falsely accused of shoplifting.
The Sheriff is directed to the truth, and Cody's reputation is repaired.
Good story,
Rhonda
Comment Written 01-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2016
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of the story. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from candyfink
Sometimes it is exhausting being ten years old, he's trying to learn, honestly, lol..... and yes I like Cody very much ....thank you for sharing, Brett
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2016
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Sometimes it is exhausting being ten years old, he's trying to learn, honestly, lol..... and yes I like Cody very much ....thank you for sharing, Brett
Comment Written 01-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2016
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