Reviews from

Homeless in America.

Homeless alliteration.

104 total reviews 
Comment from Joan E.
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I was just checking your portfolio for what I might have missed and found this alliteration-filled poem. (I don't think I can write without alliteration!) I admired your minimalist style and rhymes as well to give the theme even more impact. Well done and kudos for another win- Joan

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2016


reply by the author on 15-Aug-2016
    Thank you so very much for the generous and kind review.Thank you
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
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Being homeless is heartbreaking but when you have children and can't provide a proper place for them to lay their heads is just crushing. There are no words and I can't imagine what it's like. Great job with this

 Comment Written 30-May-2016


reply by the author on 31-May-2016
    Thank you so much EL for the kind and generous review.
Comment from jusylee72
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Well done, Hard format to follow and yet you mastered it. I enjoyed it. thank you so much for sharing the truth of what it must be like to find yourself in that position of having no home.

 Comment Written 30-May-2016


reply by the author on 30-May-2016
    Thank you for your very sweet and generous review.
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
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Congrats on a worthy win...
Yes, we can, and we must, come to their rescue..
It is amazing how many Americans are in this
situation.. I live in a small town and we do not
have homeless, as such, in our area. But I know in
cities they are numerous.
Nicely done,
:-) Carolyn

 Comment Written 30-May-2016


reply by the author on 30-May-2016
    Thank you Carolyn for your very sweet and generous review.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
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This is excellent and I am so glad it won the contest. You followed the contest requirements well and I think much more needs to be written about homelessness so I commend you for doing so, my friend ~Debbie

 Comment Written 30-May-2016


reply by the author on 30-May-2016
    Thank you for your very sweet and generous review.
Comment from candybarr
Exceptional
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A very sensitive subject.... you can rhyme better than I can, rhyming has never been one of strong suits......... thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 30-May-2016


reply by the author on 30-May-2016
    Thank you Candy for your very sweet and generous review. The six stars sure made my day
Comment from mbagby23
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It is very sad to know that we have all these homeless people living among us. Yet, the groverment does more for the courtiers than their own. Lovely and well written poem expressing homeless.

 Comment Written 30-May-2016


reply by the author on 30-May-2016
    Thank you for your very sweet and generous review.
Comment from Ben Colder
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No doubt this was a winner. It sings a sad song but a reality that happens much too often. Thank you for sharing your contest piece. Well done, poet.

 Comment Written 30-May-2016


reply by the author on 30-May-2016
    Thank you Ben for your very generous review.
Comment from Raoul D'Harmental
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Hi DonandVicki

This is a poignant poem on the plight of the homeless. Long may there be those like you (and I) who care enough to come to the rescue. 'Tis the unscreamed shame of the 21st century that some people live in houses with spare rooms or own unused houses whilst some live on the streets. Defies logic! R

 Comment Written 30-May-2016


reply by the author on 30-May-2016
    Thank you Raoul so much for your honest and generous review.
Comment from djeckert
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This is a nice description with a good message to us,all to rather judge the homeless we should help them ss Jesus told us to do. Nice job and congrats on the win.

 Comment Written 30-May-2016


reply by the author on 30-May-2016
    Thank you for your very sweet and generous review.