Comment from l.raven

Excellent

with each season brings it's own beauty...it's own flowers and seen of nature...I love your poem...and the picture sets the stage...very nicely written...Luff Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 23-May-2016

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reply by the author on 24-May-2016

Thank you for a great review zanya

reply by l.raven on 24-May-2016

you are so very welcome zanya...xxoo Linda

Comment from Lisa Deverick

Excellent

Fourteen exquisitely poetic and beautiful words you have used to create this lovely septet poem. A wonderful entry for this contest. Good luck

 Comment Written 23-May-2016

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reply by the author on 24-May-2016

Wonderful encouraging review - thank you zanya

Comment from Susanne M. Psyris

Excellent

A good entry into the Septolet Poem contest. I liked very much the content and the way both parts joined with each other. Created a great picture in the mind's eye for me. Good luck in the contest. God bless and hugs, Susanne

 Comment Written 23-May-2016

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reply by the author on 24-May-2016

I am delighted with this review -thank you zanya

Comment from Liberty Justice

Excellent

Beautiful 5 STARS for you. Looks like photo bee making honey. Poem "Whiff of floral scent suffice" appeals sense of smell with its alliteration adds to power of poem. Check mine out also. Thanks.
liberty justice

 Comment Written 22-May-2016

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reply by the author on 24-May-2016

Thank you for these positive words zanya

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Not only is this a wonderfully well composed septolet, Anonymous Poet, it is an alliteration lover's wet dream as well.

 Comment Written 22-May-2016

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reply by the author on 24-May-2016

What a wonderful review ! zanya

reply by Dean Kuch on 24-May-2016

What a wonderful poem. :)

Comment from foxangie123

Excellent

I really enjoyed this very much and the picture of the bee goes so well with. I thought of pollination as I read this. Most brilliant and well done poem. More please.

 Comment Written 22-May-2016

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reply by the author on 24-May-2016

Thank you again for this superb review zanya

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

Great job on the septolet, flowers can't last forever as they fade off during the seasons. great job and good luck on this, enjoy your day

 Comment Written 22-May-2016

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reply by the author on 24-May-2016

Thanks for reading and a great review zanya

Comment from johnwilson

Excellent

Wow, what a picture and the words to complement the ending of sweet summer!
This piece is so well done for having to use so few words in such a strict style. Thanks for sharing this!

 Comment Written 22-May-2016

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reply by the author on 24-May-2016

And thanks for reading and a great review zanya

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is an excellent write, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this septolet poem about the scents of spring fading away in summer's heat, great imagery presented here. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-May-2016

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reply by the author on 24-May-2016

Thank you and congratulations on winning the contest zanya

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

Excellent entry for the contest
with fourteen words per the prompt
Nice use of alliteration, even a couple of rhymes
Excellent picture to match poem
Seems like spring just arrived
and it's almost gone
Well done
Good luck in the contest

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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.

 Comment Written 22-May-2016

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reply by the author on 24-May-2016

Thank you - great review zanya