Best Friends Till the End
100 word story41 total reviews
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
What a sweet story. Rosie knew that having his dog with him would help Harold go in peace. There's something about dogs... I have three little ones. They're a lot of work, but a lot of love, too. :)
reply by the author on 18-May-2016
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What a sweet story. Rosie knew that having his dog with him would help Harold go in peace. There's something about dogs... I have three little ones. They're a lot of work, but a lot of love, too. :)
Comment Written 18-May-2016
reply by the author on 18-May-2016
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Thank you so much for this great review for my little story, Rhyllis. I truly appreciate your taking some of your day to read and share your encouraging thoughts. Thanks!
Comment from Spitfire
What a smart nurse. She knew that no one should die alone. Frankie was eager to be with his master (tug at the leash and snuggled up). Dynamite last line.
reply by the author on 18-May-2016
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What a smart nurse. She knew that no one should die alone. Frankie was eager to be with his master (tug at the leash and snuggled up). Dynamite last line.
Comment Written 18-May-2016
reply by the author on 18-May-2016
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Thank you so much for this great review for my little story, Spitfire. I truly appreciate your taking some of your day to read and share your encouraging thoughts. I'm pleased you enjoyed the story, and thanks for mentioning the last line.
Thanks!
Comment from Caressa_08
A virtual six for your creative talent, and it also brought tears, as a pet lover, I think that would be really the most proper way to go with a loving dog or cat by my side and so comforting than even at times ...one's own family.
This is only the second one I read in this contest, & so far much better than the first one. And, after I read all of them for this contest, then I plan to vote.
God Bless...Caressa_08
reply by the author on 18-May-2016
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A virtual six for your creative talent, and it also brought tears, as a pet lover, I think that would be really the most proper way to go with a loving dog or cat by my side and so comforting than even at times ...one's own family.
This is only the second one I read in this contest, & so far much better than the first one. And, after I read all of them for this contest, then I plan to vote.
God Bless...Caressa_08
Comment Written 18-May-2016
reply by the author on 18-May-2016
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Thank you for your wonderdul review and encouraging response to my little story, Caresaa. I truly appreciate your taking the time to read and share your thoughts. Thanks!
Comment from Kooky Clown
A sensuous story of a dying man's love for his dog and how a nurse read his mind and knew what he wanted a lovely story told well with everything needed contained in just 100 words well done.
reply by the author on 18-May-2016
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A sensuous story of a dying man's love for his dog and how a nurse read his mind and knew what he wanted a lovely story told well with everything needed contained in just 100 words well done.
Comment Written 18-May-2016
reply by the author on 18-May-2016
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Thank you so much for this great review for my little story, Kooky. I truly appreciate your taking some of your day to read and share your encouraging thoughts. Thanks!
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
very good job with this 100 word story. I think this is one of the few that isn't horror, which makes a nice change.
Well written piece which utilises the word allowance to the maximum. good tale of companionship and love.
Best of luck to you.
GMG
reply by the author on 18-May-2016
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Hi there,
very good job with this 100 word story. I think this is one of the few that isn't horror, which makes a nice change.
Well written piece which utilises the word allowance to the maximum. good tale of companionship and love.
Best of luck to you.
GMG
Comment Written 18-May-2016
reply by the author on 18-May-2016
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Thank you so much for this great review for my little story, GMG. I truly appreciate your taking some of your day to read and share your encouraging thoughts. Thanks!
Comment from heyjude
Mystery author, what a sweet story about a nurse who cared
enough to find out how to make someone's last hours
better. I like the part about the dog waiting with him.
reply by the author on 18-May-2016
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Mystery author, what a sweet story about a nurse who cared
enough to find out how to make someone's last hours
better. I like the part about the dog waiting with him.
Comment Written 18-May-2016
reply by the author on 18-May-2016
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Thank you so much for this great review for my little story, Heyjude. I truly appreciate your taking some of your day to read and share your encouraging thoughts. Thanks!
Comment from michaelcahill
No need for a photo. You have painted the picture with words. This is head and shoulders the winner. I read them all and sighed a lot. This is stellar. There's no notice that you crunched words here either. Smooth and easy to understand and read. Just the right number of words. Off to vote. Excellence. mikey
reply by the author on 18-May-2016
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No need for a photo. You have painted the picture with words. This is head and shoulders the winner. I read them all and sighed a lot. This is stellar. There's no notice that you crunched words here either. Smooth and easy to understand and read. Just the right number of words. Off to vote. Excellence. mikey
Comment Written 18-May-2016
reply by the author on 18-May-2016
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Thank you, Mikey. I truly appreciate your encouraging words and I'm pleased you like this little story. Thank you for your encouragement, your vote, and kind words. My finger goofed when voting and missed my entey. LOL I think that might be an omen. Thanks!
Comment from country ranch writer
this is a good short setting and the dog in the room to cheer up his master is so encouraging. It is just recent they will let people have their pets visit the patients I think it helps them fare better both the patient and the animal
reply by the author on 18-May-2016
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this is a good short setting and the dog in the room to cheer up his master is so encouraging. It is just recent they will let people have their pets visit the patients I think it helps them fare better both the patient and the animal
Comment Written 18-May-2016
reply by the author on 18-May-2016
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Thank you so much for this great review for my little story, Country ranch writer. I truly appreciate your taking some of your day to read and share your encouraging thoughts. Thanks!
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Comment from Joyce Crowe
very well written. a big story told with a few words. My heart breaks for the dog who will be left behind. I don't think I would change anything.
reply by the author on 18-May-2016
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very well written. a big story told with a few words. My heart breaks for the dog who will be left behind. I don't think I would change anything.
Comment Written 18-May-2016
reply by the author on 18-May-2016
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Oh, thank you so very much, Joyce, for your generous rating for my flash story. I appreciate your taking the time to read and share your encouraging comments. Thanks!
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You are welcome.
Comment from Almahar826
Oh don't be sorry I meant that as a great thing! It made me think of other stories as well, your story is great!! My feedback is great! Keep up the goo work!!!!!
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reply by the author on 18-May-2016
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Oh don't be sorry I meant that as a great thing! It made me think of other stories as well, your story is great!! My feedback is great! Keep up the goo work!!!!!
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Comment Written 17-May-2016
reply by the author on 18-May-2016
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Thanks for your review. Sorry it made you think of other stories.
