Little Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 405 "Lovely Spring Lilacs"Small and Specialty Poems
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Comment from patcelaw
Treischel this is a lovely tribute to spring. The lilacs are such fragrant flowers. I wish it was possible to grow lilacs well here. The desert is just to o dry and they require a lot of water. Patricia
reply by the author on 17-May-2016
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Treischel this is a lovely tribute to spring. The lilacs are such fragrant flowers. I wish it was possible to grow lilacs well here. The desert is just to o dry and they require a lot of water. Patricia
Comment Written 17-May-2016
reply by the author on 17-May-2016
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Stank you Patricia. They are very lovely.
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Stank you Patricia. Is this what you really meant? I laughed so hare I was almost in tears.
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Oops,Oh no! I meant Thank you!
Comment from Aishuaash
Good work dear. The way you synched words and added colors to nature are crazily mind blowing. The last words of lines and the starting words of very next lines are same right. Of course the words you penned for this really satisfy the flow of your poem.
reply by the author on 17-May-2016
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Good work dear. The way you synched words and added colors to nature are crazily mind blowing. The last words of lines and the starting words of very next lines are same right. Of course the words you penned for this really satisfy the flow of your poem.
Comment Written 17-May-2016
reply by the author on 17-May-2016
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Thank you Aishuaash. For a wonderful review. You name is very close to my daughter's of Aisha.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A well-written Loop Poem and beautiful photograph of these Lilac flowers you used to compliment your work. It seems to be a fun poem to work with.
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A well-written Loop Poem and beautiful photograph of these Lilac flowers you used to compliment your work. It seems to be a fun poem to work with.
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Comment Written 17-May-2016
reply by the author on 17-May-2016
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Thank you Sandra, it is.
Comment from Eric1
Hi Tom, wonderful well structured poem and great to read, I have never seen this style before but I really like the way you have written it, great flow and use of wonderful description my friend.
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Hi Tom, wonderful well structured poem and great to read, I have never seen this style before but I really like the way you have written it, great flow and use of wonderful description my friend.
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Comment Written 17-May-2016
reply by the author on 17-May-2016
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Thank you very much Eric.
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You are welcome my friend.
