From out of the Grayness
Viewing comments for Chapter 66 "Passion's Field"Reaching from the gray areas to understand life
34 total reviews
Comment from Irish Rain
Yep, absolute truth. God always takes the quiet way, and is often found on paths of solitude, and gratitude. Wonderful observations Mr. Vance!! Blessings....
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2017
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Yep, absolute truth. God always takes the quiet way, and is often found on paths of solitude, and gratitude. Wonderful observations Mr. Vance!! Blessings....
Comment Written 13-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2017
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Thanks so much for this lovely and uplifting review! it is greatly appreciated. Vance
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
This is a beautiful and very profound write, Vance. I love your descriptions in this line:
"My eyes reach out to seek a place where I might, but a calm and soothing sonnet yield
And yet the wafting steam of desire brings only fixed attention to this tangled mind now sealed'
Wonderfully done! ~Kerry
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2017
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This is a beautiful and very profound write, Vance. I love your descriptions in this line:
"My eyes reach out to seek a place where I might, but a calm and soothing sonnet yield
And yet the wafting steam of desire brings only fixed attention to this tangled mind now sealed'
Wonderfully done! ~Kerry
Comment Written 13-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2017
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Thank you so much Kerry for this lovely review and stars. It is always a gift to hear from you! Vance
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Your very welcome.
Comment from brenda faye curtis
Once again, Vance, you have outdone yourself. I know this poem is a year old but it's fresh to me, and it's beautiful. I get the impression this work is based on a life-altering experience that reaffirmed your faith. If so, you are fortunate. Thank you for sharing it.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
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Once again, Vance, you have outdone yourself. I know this poem is a year old but it's fresh to me, and it's beautiful. I get the impression this work is based on a life-altering experience that reaffirmed your faith. If so, you are fortunate. Thank you for sharing it.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
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Oh Dear Brenda...you have made my day! I;m so glad you enjoyed this work and thanks so much for the glorious, generous stars! Vance
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You are most welcome, Vance. Have a blessed day!
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thank you ! you have brought me joy! Vance
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You're welcome, Vance. Have a great day!
Comment from Lucian Carter
I really like your rhyme scheme and the rhymes themselves. You really chose your words well. The capitalized GRATITUDE is nice. Too bad you couldn't have one in the first stanza as well. A nice poem.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
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I really like your rhyme scheme and the rhymes themselves. You really chose your words well. The capitalized GRATITUDE is nice. Too bad you couldn't have one in the first stanza as well. A nice poem.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
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Thanks so much Lucian, for your wonderful review and stars. Great to meet you! Vance
Comment from poetwatch
Your thoughts may waver, but your passion is in the words you write. You give from your heart "For Love exists in GRATITUDE and therein shall yield a bond with GOD that's so very sadly found by few." Well said, a lovely poem. Thank you for sharing your joy.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
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Your thoughts may waver, but your passion is in the words you write. You give from your heart "For Love exists in GRATITUDE and therein shall yield a bond with GOD that's so very sadly found by few." Well said, a lovely poem. Thank you for sharing your joy.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
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Thank you so much poetwatch for this lovely review and stars! Glad you enjoyed it! Vance
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about how one makes and keeps growing one's passion, as a practice it is good if passion is chosen deeply by heart and in terms of one's relevance of eligibility; I liked.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
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This speaks about how one makes and keeps growing one's passion, as a practice it is good if passion is chosen deeply by heart and in terms of one's relevance of eligibility; I liked.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
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Thank you sincerely Alcreator, for this wonderful review and stars! So glad you liked it and I hope to see you again soon! Vance
Comment from patcelaw
It seems human kind so often forget to be grateful for the blessings we get from God. We will ask and He will provide, but let a problem arise and then we grumble and complain. This is nicely written. Patricia
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
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It seems human kind so often forget to be grateful for the blessings we get from God. We will ask and He will provide, but let a problem arise and then we grumble and complain. This is nicely written. Patricia
Comment Written 11-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
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Thank you so much for this great review and stars! I'm sorry to go negative on FS with harsh dialogs rather than the GRATITUDE I truly want to celebrate, but this madness is simply too difficult and wrong to be able to ignore it. I certainly....sincerely appreciate your kind review and generous stars! Blessings! Vance
Comment from moongirlwriter
It is so true, when we are out in nature. . .it just changes everything or sometimes we hope it will. Then you throw in the weather as it changes and a new appreciation of God's power confronts our creativity and gives us a new perspective. I so enjoyed your attempt to find a place to bring forth creativity. . .this usually works for me as well.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2017
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It is so true, when we are out in nature. . .it just changes everything or sometimes we hope it will. Then you throw in the weather as it changes and a new appreciation of God's power confronts our creativity and gives us a new perspective. I so enjoyed your attempt to find a place to bring forth creativity. . .this usually works for me as well.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2017
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Thank you so much moongirlwriter, for your really lovely and generous review! It is sincerely appreciated and I always am glad to know that my
work has done something positive for someone out there! Blessing and hugs and please don't be a stranger! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
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You're welcome
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
Hi Vance
Gratitude makes sense of our past, brings peace for today, and creates a vision for tomorrow. .........a wonderful read, written with beautiful imagery....Excellent
Mitchell
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017
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Hi Vance
Gratitude makes sense of our past, brings peace for today, and creates a vision for tomorrow. .........a wonderful read, written with beautiful imagery....Excellent
Mitchell
Comment Written 10-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017
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thanks so much Mitch for this wonderful review and gracious stars. HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi, Vance;
Such beautiful words! I do believe and agree with you that there are very few who acknowledge with GRATITUDE the gifts our Creator has bestowed upon them. If we come to Him with prayers of Thanksgiving, we are more blessed than before,
~patty~
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017
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Hi, Vance;
Such beautiful words! I do believe and agree with you that there are very few who acknowledge with GRATITUDE the gifts our Creator has bestowed upon them. If we come to Him with prayers of Thanksgiving, we are more blessed than before,
~patty~
Comment Written 10-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017
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thank you Patty, for your encouraging review! It is always a pleasure to hear from you in ALL ways. Vance
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WISELY PUT DEAR ONE! I just keep lovin' you more all the time! Vance
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'ABSOLUTELY AND AMEN!!! You are too right and very wise! Vance
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You are very wise indeed! Blessings always! Vance
