Let Heaven Wait!
Seeking Heaven's gate30 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Jay. Your poem has a nice pace, flow and rhyme. Message is one we all hope will resonate not only with others but with ourselves. I guess everyone tries to do the best they can. Marilyn
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Hi Jay. Your poem has a nice pace, flow and rhyme. Message is one we all hope will resonate not only with others but with ourselves. I guess everyone tries to do the best they can. Marilyn
Comment Written 03-Sep-2018
Comment from Teri7
This is a very interesting poem you have penned about waiting to go to Heaven. You used very interesting and good words. Good job. Blessings, Teri
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This is a very interesting poem you have penned about waiting to go to Heaven. You used very interesting and good words. Good job. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 02-Sep-2018
Comment from heavenempress
Nice piece of work. I enjoyed the poetry. Took it as a reminder of this place and how we should fight for heaven. Thanks for the uplift. I recommend your work to others. Keep it up. So rich!
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Nice piece of work. I enjoyed the poetry. Took it as a reminder of this place and how we should fight for heaven. Thanks for the uplift. I recommend your work to others. Keep it up. So rich!
Comment Written 02-Sep-2018
Comment from Shreya Ramanathan
I agree with you every bit. We are just not to march towards our grave, every person needs to think of his present life and what he could give to the world and raising above one's own needs. There are things that need to be sorted before we feel entitled to be in heaven and in peace.
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I agree with you every bit. We are just not to march towards our grave, every person needs to think of his present life and what he could give to the world and raising above one's own needs. There are things that need to be sorted before we feel entitled to be in heaven and in peace.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2018
Comment from LeftHandedScribe
I immediately began reading this poem aloud. I am an actor and when I can pour out words like honey I know it is very good writing. Your poem felt this way--so full of flow and delicious rhythm. Well done.
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I immediately began reading this poem aloud. I am an actor and when I can pour out words like honey I know it is very good writing. Your poem felt this way--so full of flow and delicious rhythm. Well done.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2018
Comment from fafa
More that poetry is a prose where you describe of very good form and detail splendidly, it continues for this footpath, I like, blessings
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More that poetry is a prose where you describe of very good form and detail splendidly, it continues for this footpath, I like, blessings
Comment Written 14-Apr-2017
Comment from tfawcus
I like the premise of this one. We have it in our power to make a heaven here on earth or, rather, to stop making a hell out of the earthly heaven we have so generously been given.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017
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I like the premise of this one. We have it in our power to make a heaven here on earth or, rather, to stop making a hell out of the earthly heaven we have so generously been given.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017
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Thank you for a very interesting comment
Comment from Janet Foor
An excellent message in this well written poem. We do need to tidy up a bit before we go. That covers a lot of territory and everyone of us.
Very nicely done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017
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An excellent message in this well written poem. We do need to tidy up a bit before we go. That covers a lot of territory and everyone of us.
Very nicely done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 14-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017
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I greatly appreciate your comment-thank you
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Jaybird - a well written poem with a relevant message for today's world. I like your line 'Those streets of gold will not be found,' - we live in a time where this dominates people's lives. Your poem is written in good aabb rhyme and has good rhythm. An interesting read and a good final stanza -
Our much sought Gods must surely see
the depth of our depravity.
Should we be seeking Heaven's gate?
I rest my case-Let Heaven wait............ Good poem - warm regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017
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Hi Jaybird - a well written poem with a relevant message for today's world. I like your line 'Those streets of gold will not be found,' - we live in a time where this dominates people's lives. Your poem is written in good aabb rhyme and has good rhythm. An interesting read and a good final stanza -
Our much sought Gods must surely see
the depth of our depravity.
Should we be seeking Heaven's gate?
I rest my case-Let Heaven wait............ Good poem - warm regards Dorothy
Comment Written 14-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017
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Thank you for your considerate comment
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
We really do need to try and do our bit on Earth before we pass, your words are clear and inspirational that flow beautifully.
Difficult to pick a favourite but mine was the last stanza which concluded brilliantly
Have a lovely day
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017
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We really do need to try and do our bit on Earth before we pass, your words are clear and inspirational that flow beautifully.
Difficult to pick a favourite but mine was the last stanza which concluded brilliantly
Have a lovely day
Comment Written 14-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017
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Thank you for your generous comme t-greatly appreciated
