Comment from brenda bickers

Exceptional

Hi TREISCHEL,
I love a good sonnet so three in one was just awesome. You have kept the flow throughout all three and they read well as one poem. I like the presentation and colour.
Great writing.
Brenda:))x

 Comment Written 07-May-2016

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reply by the author on 07-May-2016

Thank you so much Brenda. I appreciate the wonderful review,mas well as the stars.

Comment from Preston McWhorter

Exceptional

Hi, Treischel,
"Crabapple Bloom" is superior poetic work, large in labor, major in mythic imagery,
fine in figurative language, fragrant in figures of speech, mighty in meter, colorful in composition, and righteous in rhyme. A work worthy of the Greek gods whom you honor.
Your friend and colleague,
Preston

 Comment Written 07-May-2016

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reply by the author on 07-May-2016

Wow! That is quite a stunning review. THank you so much Preston, for it and the recognition in stars.

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

these are just excellent all three are very well done, wish I really had the 6 for you on these wonderful pieces, plus showing the differences in the sonnet styles. great job on these, have yourself a wonderful day

 Comment Written 07-May-2016

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reply by the author on 07-May-2016

Thank you William.

Comment from LIJ Red

Excellent

I cussed like Noah when the worm got his gourd when the blizzard of 1993 broke down my big crabapple tree. It perfumed the whole hilltop.
Sorry, gang--the English one seems more like a sonnet to me. Excellent.

 Comment Written 07-May-2016

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reply by the author on 07-May-2016

Thank you Lij Red. I take your point.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written and well-planned Tiara of Sonnets. Still far above my abilities, although I enjoyed to read this wonderful series of sonnets. An excellent photograph to compliment your work.

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 Comment Written 07-May-2016

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reply by the author on 07-May-2016

Thank you Sandra. I appreciate the review and comments

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

And Brenda Bickers produced two linked sonnets that also linked end to beginning the other day. I christened it a bracelet.

These are a lovely trio or this is a lovely tiara whichever you prefer. You take us right through th flowering process from bud to fallen bloom. A couple of toches of dyslexia I noted. In your note 'asure' but corrected in the poem to 'azure' an incorrect in both note and poem 'Zypher' should be 'Zephyr'.

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 Comment Written 07-May-2016

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reply by the author on 07-May-2016

Thank you Pantygynt. I'll fix those.