Comment from Heidixoxo

Excellent

Hello poet,
First of all, I really like your art work of choice. It matches your unique and completely different approach to this. You have done a great job with creating and forming this poem making for a fun read. I would not personally recommend any type of change be made to this. Best of luck to you with this and all of your future postings. Keep writing....
Heidixoxo

 Comment Written 04-May-2016

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reply by the author on 04-May-2016

Hi Heidi, What a lovely comment for my poem and I was very pleased to this great image for my tongue in cheek poem .thank you so much for your best wishes of luck . I assume it will win as it is so good Ha Ha Ha. I will keep writing now the cat is out Cheers for a great review

Comment from jusylee72

Excellent

I have no sixes but you nailed it. Loved it. Picture, words every thing about it. What a great description of this word. The Pompous Ass who has no idea that he is Arrogant. Perfect.

 Comment Written 04-May-2016

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reply by the author on 04-May-2016

Hi jusylee72 . Wow thank you for this very encouraging review. I did enjoy having a try at this prompt and it was written with tongue in cheek. Ha Ha yes I am sure their are many who may be like this . Glad you stopped by Cheers

Comment from jane.fallon

Excellent

Excellent.

Just one point for your attention:

Almost ever subject" - should this be "Almost every subject"?

This is very well written . Well done.

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 Comment Written 04-May-2016

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reply by the author on 04-May-2016

Hi Jane, many thanks for your great review and suggestions, perhaps the whole statement should be in talking marks I will look into this .I had fun with this word and couldn't resist the challenge Thanks for your positive review Cheers

reply by jane.fallon on 04-May-2016

I keep promising to slow down with fanstory, then I see an interesting prompt ........